Can’t wait for the next update!

The fire nation soldiers must've been losing their shit when that hurricane appeared and Percy started fighting their firelord

Percy on his Kratos shit

Excellent chapter

Have Percy Finish Ozai of. i have been asking for PercyxAzula from the first part, hope I will get it. I liked the chapter though it was smaller.

10/10 nothing more shall be said

If Percy loses and is captured I'll riot. You simply can't follow a speech like the one in this chapter by having Percy lose, it would kill any credibility in the character. Instead, having Ozai run (I imagine you don't want to stop the war here), reaffirming Percy's words, would be a logical follow-up to this chapter. Also, we already had a 'Percy captured' arc and another would be not only annoying but redundant.

Ok ok ok we're in some good shit right now. I won't lie when I got to the speech part I was kind of dreading it since I feel like too many fanfic writers make him too boastful in situations like this and the dialogue ends up reading like crap/comes off as to cringy (like it doesn't even feel like something he would say). But it wasn't bad. No babbling or Percy spitting out like a million titles. I guess you could improve it but I liked it enough, so good job on that. Also I think I know what's going to happen next in the story but I won't say

Been a long time since my heart started pumping while reading a story, great job and I can’t wait to see Percy put the smack down on those idiots. Although I’m wondering if you could hint at just how inhuman Percy is, I’ve been reading some Mycenaean Percy stories and they really explore the inhuman nature of Percy and the Greek gods. Obviously it’s your story and your plan, I’m just spitballing here and the story is great either way

Perfect as always looking forward for more updates

Ozai got his ass handed to him lol

Absolutely amazing chapter

Holy shit, it’s been way too long since I read this. Idk how many chapters I missed through life being hectic, but damn, did I miss reading this.

Anyways, awesome writing of them being in and how Percy is handling the situation, including confronting Ozai. I’m not too sold on the dialogue between them, but everything else, including what Percy was feeling is very spot on and very much what Percy would do.

I loved it, keep it up!

DDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNGGGG!
Lol this is AWESOME! I love how the fact that Ozai has to try and keep his composure like, "You're just a child who couldn't stand up to my daughter! What are YOU going to do?"
Percy be like, well I AM responsible for the hurricane that is literally decimating your entire capitol atm. Also, I beat your daughter in at least three separate duels. Also I've been to hell and back, so there's that. Also I've fought the Titan of the Western Flame, so I mean you can try to use your fire I guess, lol.
And then Ozai gets stabbed, and he's just openmouthed like, "Omgosh, you just STABBED me!"
XD
I realize that's not really how this went, but that's how I kinda see it. I really like this chapter, and gosh darn it, this was EPIC! I love seeing that one version of Percy where he's just like, 'playtime's over, kids.'

What will happen next.