Reviews for In an Ocean of Stars |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Quite frankly you should make the Gods suffer. Percy should become friends with some Titans and Primordials like Nyx, Erebus, Aether, Hemera and maybe Pontus so that he has a good Backing and nobody ever uses Percy. Still an interesting Story IF Percy doesnt become the B#tch for Olympus like in 99 % of Percy Jackson Fanfics. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like no matter how chill percy is he would lose his trust in the gods he had all ready done so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay we need the next update ASAP. loved the relationship progress! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It finally happened yes. I can't wait for Artemis confessions next. Hope you get out of your writer's block soon. But if not, I will be patiently waiting for your next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it perfect as always looking forward for more updates |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter , thank you much for writing it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am loving this, these last two chapters have been the best I have read in 100s of fanfictions I have come across. Simply brilliant, I can't tell you how many times I have read the previous chapter, I am sure I'll read this multiple times as well. I love not only the way you have written Percy, Artemis and Diana but also Rhea, Poseidon and the titans. Can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() Hope you get over your writers block because this story is amazing! Keep up the good work . |
![]() ![]() I legit shrieked out of joy when i saw there was an update and scared the living hell out of my sister who is half convinced that i need to go to an asylum when she saw me grinning like a psychopath as i read the new chap I read the previous 23 chapters at one go cause thats when i discovered this awesome fic and i have to say this is on my list of my top 5 fav fics on ffn If this wasnt a fanfic i would be yelling at you to publish this brilliance Hope your block relieves you soon! PS-my phone refuses to let me login and im too lazy to switch on the laptop rn but kindly add Just Another Half - Blood to the list of your fans |
![]() ![]() ![]() I fucking like this chapter. Also the fact that this is an actual pertemis not abandoned yet makes me like this story even more. Thanks a lot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is fuel for my own book thank you. May I shed writing motivation upon ye too. I’m in love with this version of Artemis |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooooo finally the emotions are getting to them |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like the long chapters. If it takes long to get one out that's completely fine with me, though some of the other readers might be a little irked. I like the pacing of this story. There is progress in almost all of the chapters and the fluff is mixed with plot beautifully. Well done. |
![]() ![]() Bro pls update... Its been hella too long since you have last made an update... |
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