Reviews for In an Ocean of Stars |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Personally i love long chapters it makes waiting for the next one easier i tend to spread my resding out, i read for maybe 10-15 minutes at a time kids will do that. But keep up the great work the imagination tou have is what makes this story great |
![]() ![]() long chapters are cool, but they take too long to come out... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Longer chapters mean more to read while waiting for uploads, so bigger is better |
![]() ![]() Why don't you try adding a bit of New York slang to Percy's speech? It sounds more like Percy is unable to speak normally. It's just a suggestion, don't take it too seriously, because it's just a minor detail, but I'm a firm believer of: 'Details make the difference.'. Maybe add that? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Referring to your Authors note, In my opinion, I prefer longer chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant chapter! Looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this story going to have a happy ending for Percy and Artemis. I really don’t like stories with sad endings (e.g. Percy dying) so if you are fine with spoiling it would be great to know in advance! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perhaps the best Pertemis stories I have stumbled upon! No odd guardian, hunters torturing or anything silly like that happening! And Percy just being himself, and not loosing his backbone (Other than towards certain moon goddess) is a really good thing to read about. Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hes way to loyal. it just makes him look like a complete fool. |
![]() ![]() Overprotective sweet Artemis: Funny nice hunters: Goated Titian’s : Big daddy Poseidon appearance: Funny scared cute lil Percy: Hilarious Diana: (dam Percy gonna get a beating ) Honestly what could possibly top this off even more? The only thing I could think of is making sure we see Diana and Artemis verbally abuse Percy for not wearing their gift in the next chapter. Maybe the hunters and Percy hanging out again? Honestly this is just too good |
![]() ![]() ![]() pls update |
![]() ![]() Just release the chapters a bit faster |
![]() ![]() ![]() Despite all his experiences Percy still remains at least a little bit "a seaweed brain" :) I enjoyed more Pertemis. Poseidon - nice dramatic entrance :-D Diana - I would feel a bit sorry for Percy, however he needs to get a little more selfpreservation beeten into his head. When it comes to long chapters - I am glad for whatever update you have, however I personally would prefer shorter chapters more often |
![]() ![]() Fantastic chapter. Love the build up of percy and artemis/diana. And as far as the long chapters, I love them. Keep them long in my opinion. And keep up the great work. Cannot wait for the next installment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it perfect chapter keep the updates coming |