Another banger chapter! Amazing job with this chapter, I really like these long chapters, but I don't mind the shorter ones. I'm impressed you got the update out this quickly. Happy writing! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I love longer chapters, please keep doing them! Looking forward to the next update!

How was this 18k words?! It feels like I finished reading in five minutes.

More Yandere Artemis plz.

The chapter was great, and the long posts are great. Keep up the great work.

Personally I prefer long chapters. I like to spend part of the day relaxing and reading a good story. But in the end it is better that you do what is most comfortable for you 3

First I want to say that I think you are doing an amazing job. I love your creativity and I'm looking forward to seeing what ideas you have for this story, especially on the theme of war.

I think more of Diana would be awesome as well
but all in all, an amazing chapter!
thank you!

My opinions on longer chapters:
While I prefer shorter ones, around 10kish words, I also think it's easier to write longer chapters since you can get in a flow and write quicker.

All in all, do what you are most comfortable with (even though I'm slightly biased because I just want to read the fanfictions)

Finally. Great chapter I couldn't wait to read the interaction between Percy and Artemis. Your story is so well written and the plot is so compelling that you want to read more and more. So keep the chapters this long. Thanks for your story and I can't wait to read the new chapter

perfect. Loved it.

Rarely do I write reviews. I'm a lurker, so to speak - that doesn't mean I don'tlike what you, or other PJO-fanfic writers put out - on the contrary.

I do like longer chapters, as it means more stuff to read over the sometimes long waits between updates. Obviously, a healthy author is a happy author, and a happy author means a writing author - always take care of yourself before even considering writing a single word.

Longer chapters would be much appreciated, provided you want to write them. This, along with "Memoria Damnata" and "Hope Is a Delicate Thing" over on AO3, and "Harry Potter Squatter" here on , are by far my favourite PJO-fics that I've read thus far.

Happy hunting,
Perko.

You made my day with this update, Poseidon’s entrance was sick. Thank you for continuing the story. Gratz on 200k words

Amazing Chapter as always. Can't wait for the next one and see how screwed percy is :D

I love the longer chapters, it's not a bother to read and I keep wishing that the chapter were even longer. I also love that Artemis tries to protect Percy because normally, Percy is the one always protecting Artemis. It's a nice change.

Look like my son, sadness when percy mentions about his grandfather(kronos) being a murderous bastard, melancholy when he mentions his aunt(hestia prob) saying his grandmother was very kind, Dareia, reia, Rhea?