Another amazing chapter. Can't wait for chapter 26!

Message to Percy " Move on pal it's destiny and besides you and annabeth are uncle and niece and besides you're married to Diana and Artemis try to get know each other ,instead being a wuss"

please update soon, im dying from the suspense

Attacking your fiance because you’re unhappy with him? What the hell is wrong with this hypocrite? This has got to be the most unhealthy relationship I’ve read about. I don’t know why Percy is still behaving the way he is. It’s been 24 chapters. When’s he gonna start acting like himself and not like a child? The less said about psycho Artemis and Diana the better. Maybe there's a therapist in Olympus, clearly they need it.

That was difficult to read. Hopefully, we get on with the war soon. That’s where the good stuff is. The action, the peaceful Titans, diverse characters all around.

I disagree, seeing Percy act like a whimpering puppy when it comes to his fiance is nothing short of tiring and annoying. Bleh. I don’t know if my memory is failing me but I don’t recall Percy being so shy with affection. There is no time for romance in a war with Tartarus and who knows who or what else, these two need to get on with it before it’s too late!

That aside, honestly speaking, I think I would enjoy this story even more if the romance took a backseat. My favorite parts of this have been the parts with the peaceful Titans and the battles with Tartarus’ forces. Really good stuff there. The parts with Diana were nice too. Honestly, I think the dynamic between Percy and Artemis is putting me off, especially the whole I'm so scared of my fiance part. I just get put out every time I read that.

The whole protective Artemis thing was obvious, though I think people might understand it better if it goes both ways. Both of them being protective of the other. It’s no surprise people concluded that she thought he was weak though. Her disposition toward him in general, his frankly spineless behavior regarding Artemis. He crumbles and submits if she stares at him for more than one second. It’s a logical conclusion.

It’s important to portray a character properly to make sure the readers don’t get the wrong idea. Like displaying Percy, strong-willed and defiant. Untamable, as we all know he is. Or rather should be. More often than not, it’s the opposite here.

Percy as we know, is loyal. Fiercely loyal. Especially towards his fiance who he is fast falling in love with. He should be just as, if not even more protective than Artemis. Even if she is immortal. That’s just the kinda guy he is!

But we don’t see that.

It doesn’t need to be a life-or-death situation for him to display that fatal flaw of his.

Anyway though, great job on this chapter, your writing is improving quite a bit. Keep up the good work!

Wonderful chapter! It sure is nice to see you improve each chapter. Really enjoying this change of pace. It’s really refreshing to see Percy interacting with the peaceful Titans instead of the Olympians. Much more down to Earth.

Wonderful chapter! It sure is nice to see you improve each chapter. Really enjoying this change of pace. It’s refreshing to see Percy interacting with the peaceful Titans instead of the Olympians. Much more down to Earth. Great writing and interesting enemies as well. Good job!

Bingo. Damn, I’m good. I do wonder how they managed to make such a convincing Artemis copy though.

Ah. So I haven’t finished reading but I’m guessing that’s Rhea?

Great chapter!

Princess carried? I’d fulfill Apollo’s vision then and there if I was Percy

Dareia? Hestia? Daring!

"Artemis isn't forcing me to do anything!" Finally, Percy spoke up, his eyes narrowing with anger,
"Every decision I make, I make on my own accord Do not use my name to attack the woman who has been nothing but kind to me."

I could poke so many holes in that statement. Well, a bald-faced lie to be exact. That’s why Loyalty is his flaw though. That aside, did Athena really just bring up Annabeth? Intellectually intelligent, yes. Emotionally? You could find a rock more compassion.

Great chapter! Really enjoyed the bit with Diana and Percy.

Great work on this chapter, finally seeing these two have a proper conversation is great to see. Now Diana is here I’m sure things will be somewhat smooth sailing. Hopefully.