Reviews for In an Ocean of Stars |
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Radiant Arabian Nights chapter 4 . 11/13/2021 Love it!:) |
Radiant Arabian Nights chapter 3 . 11/13/2021 Love it! |
Radiant Arabian Nights chapter 2 . 11/13/2021 Loved this! |
Radiant Arabian Nights chapter 1 . 11/13/2021 Love |
Kelvin Wong Jun Sheng chapter 5 . 11/10/2021 Great Story. |
Desluk chapter 5 . 11/10/2021 really glad I found this story. |
plebston323 chapter 4 . 11/9/2021 Okay, I just posted a weird review cuz I thought this one was old. This was because almost all good stories are old and don't get past a few chapters so I thought I'd pay respect to the writer before realizing it's a new story and I made a weird review. Sorry and Nice book! |
plebston323 chapter 5 . 11/9/2021 Ah, despite the fact it's no longer going, this story will forever be great, and may all who read it take something great away as I did. |
skullwarrior18 chapter 5 . 11/9/2021 I really love this plot Good job Will be expecting a great story from you. |
Guest chapter 5 . 11/8/2021 Another! Yeah please do update soon, haha I love the interactions and most of all the reasoning that supports them in your writing |
TurtlesTale chapter 5 . 11/8/2021 Please update this |
Ryan Fowler chapter 5 . 11/8/2021 this is geting better and better ever chapter keep up the good work cant wait for more |
Mark Andrew chapter 5 . 11/7/2021 Okay.. one addition I feel would've made an even more laughter.. When Hera was confused about Jerry the goldfish.. Percy should've asked Arty to yell out Bambi or Shadow. Had a deer and wolf run up all excited she called for them. Priceless though with he response at the end haha |
Neffler101 chapter 5 . 11/7/2021 Great chapter, can’t wait for the next one. |
Guest chapter 5 . 11/7/2021 I think Aphrodite has a little too little control over her emotions, otherwise you made that part well though. Artemis worry is understandable so I admit I just personally don't like that part that much. But Hera lying though to gain an some leverage over them is a nice idea that I think was nice to implement. Also I dont know what to think about Heras characterization. I think I said it in another guest review from a while already where I explained something to the vote of the council but I'm not sure. I think in general the gods are more reserved and on top of their emotions as well as have a little more formal speech but that's a personal opinion and may not be the case of every good. Chapter was good otherwise. Also maybe an idea for a future visit of one of the gods would be to send an echo and/or one of their sacred animals to bring the message as this would be a pretty 'god' thing to do to never do something themselves. Yeah, like I said good work and cya |