Hi, I really love this story. And I love that Artemis and her hunt are not man-haters. And they actually aren't even in the original works of rick riordan. They're feminists and hate misoganysts, not men. I love his and look forward to more

I am excited for this story

its very good chap. I hope u will update soon

I really hope u update soon this is so good! U have a talent here!

OMG this fic is so good. I love that you are staying away from the cliche you don't find a lot of authors who do that anymore. I want to read some more!

I’m like the story and the direction it’s taking. That said, there are a lot of redundancies. It detracts using the Man-Hater concept over and over. Percy also stood toe-to-toe with Hermes at the start, so his overwhelming fear when he previously thought he was to be tortured doesn’t quite make sense. I like the direction you’ve taken the relationship at the end of the last chapter and the reaction/behavior of the hunters. Can’t wait to see more!

This is an interesting variation from the path that most Fics take towards the whole Artemis and Percy thing. I have to say I like the direction and I’m curious to see where it goes. The vindictive Hera is a nice touch to make the whole situation very believable as the reactions of most that are involved seem plausible as well. The tone and writing style is well done and overall it’s a very interesting story. Keep up the good work.

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This looks like a great story how long r u going to make it?

Pretty great story so far, I would suggest working on making sure to capitalize the first letter of a new sentence even if it comes after quotation marks.

Just a very minor thing, but it’s the only real issue I have seen so far.

nice work

This much more unique than the one present

I’m really looking forward to how this story plays out! Keep up the good work, and I hope Percy can find some happiness soon.

I do wonder. Will you have Artemis wonder where and why Percy is so far away from Camp?
Almost feel like he was a bit too calm... like once he said he would stay away, just stiffly nod and walk out... least something to make Arty feel worse. In way she does deserve it. I know she ain't use to it, relationship and all, but still! This is Percy we're talking about!
A heated argument and then about where he is and fluff.. heh. Somethings gonna boil over sooner or later.
I'm interested to see what happens with the animals. What's next? A wolf pack?

This. Story. Is. AWESOME! It takes the quite common theme of the relationship between Percy and Artemis, but in completely new and utterly fascinating way! I can't wait for the next chapter, this story just made it into one of the best stories I've ever read, counting not only FanFictions, but also normal books!