Reviews for In an Ocean of Stars
Xpe chapter 3 . 10/18/2021
)awesome
HPfanfictioner66 chapter 3 . 10/18/2021
Nice story. Liked it so far. I think by becoming a god, Percy should get a new weapon too. Like the scythe of Kronos or something equivalently powerful.
I really hope that Percy gets a few powerful domains when he becomes an Olympian, you know like Time and Earth because Percy defeated Kronos and Gaea. Also there is no GOD of time or Earth. Percy would be a great addition if he has the domains of Time and Earth(also something related to the sea- like tides)
But, that is assuming you are making Percy an Olympian and also haven't decided his domains.
But, do remember to give him a domain so that he can be exempt from the ancient laws like Artemis.
And, tbh I don't think that any huntress should engage Percy in combat or successfully shoot at him or injure him. Percy Jackson remains the greatest demigod in history. Some fics show that a bunch of huntresses shoot at him and he ends up severely injured, which I just don't get. Percy defeated almost every normal monster in Greek Myths, defeated Titans, Giants and was even able to defeat Ares with next to no training. So, that just bugs me in the wrong way.
Xpe chapter 1 . 10/18/2021
*styx
agony fate chapter 3 . 10/18/2021
I like the leaving line by Nico and how impactful the relationship between the children of the Big Three is.
Glad to see Annabeth and Jason are still alive lol.
Also, it makes sense to have Percy not tell what happened at Olympus at first, but eventually have his feelings catch up and yeah
It feels in-character for Percy imo and I love the way you do it.

Hera's character depiction is awesome too
agony fate chapter 2 . 10/18/2021
Loved how the storyline developed and no shit like they forced him into godhood and the start was honestly hilarious with Percy guessing what was going to happen to him lol.

I like how Hestia is depicted too!
agony fate chapter 1 . 10/18/2021
I love the chapter! It was awesome and I liked the way you broke Annabeth and Percy up, instead of them tropes lol.

The Council meeting was well detailed and very well written!

Everyone's actions made sense to why they were doing what they were doing and stuff
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