loved where it was going but saw no reason for the M rating hmmm

I really hope you update this! It's so good!

I agree with the general concensus, how dare you leave this as a one shot lmao. This is really well written, depressing to the point of annoying but that's what depression is. Sad and annoying. I enjoyed the hell out of this.

Ugh! Cant believe you left it there. I wanna knowww what happened!

more, more, more please... evil cliffy...

That's it?

Thanks for the read.

Lmao, I cannot believe you left it here! Gosh I want the rest! It was so fun!

There definitely needs to be another chapter!

Whoa, Rosalie must really love Bella to do something like that and I hope she reacts to what Rose did! I can't wait to read more.. Please, make this a short story at least instead of a one/two shot.

This needs a second chapter; how dare you leave us with a cliffhanger!

Ok, well please... you can't just leave it here, lol. Very interesting, would love to see where you go next.

that was a serious waste of time

So far so good are you planning on giving her a mate? you should make it a Bella Tanya story as she's only one without a mate.

CNt wait to see where this goes such an interesting idea