Reviews for The Wolf Who Conquered (Robb Stark SI) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love coming back to this story every once in a while. Most SIs either have the protagonist freaking out while trying to survive or change a bunch of things while gloating about how smart they are. I always wondered who the three people Arya were. Melisandre was one obviously but the other two? From some of the historical excerpts we don't hear anything about Daenerys so I assumed that she was another but who would be number three? Euron Greyjoy? The show didn't really use him that much so I doubt it and the Ironborn are already being driven from the Westerlands. Roose Bolton or Walder Frey are both under control or don't see a real opportunity without a lot of risk. Stannis? Rob has him outnumbered and damn near surrounded so I don't see the point. I thought maybe Doran Martell because he is keeping his family out of the war but at this point with Tywin and all of his kids/grandchildren dead I don't see why any of Dorne would want to join at this point. Maybe if they were given the mountain but I don't think that would be enough for Oberyn. Littlefinger? Already dead by Ser Kevin. Lysa? What would be the point, it would accomplish more if Robin Arryn died instead but I doubt Rob would waste a name on him especially since he just sent reinforcements to help the Royce alliance. Varys/Ollena? Maybe to make sure neither sought to kill him. If we are going by the books then maybe Aegon but without dragons and only the Golden Company and Dorne I'm not sure it would be needed. Maybe Arianne Martell to keep book Aegon from marrying putting that alliance on thin ice. I doubt naming the Night King would work but it would be funny if it did. At this point I don't know who would be worth it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() People who are asking what would the base of Robb's claim to the Iron Throne. Simple, By Rights of Conquest. He was not there to rebel, to depose, or to overthrow. He is there to conquer. Aegon didn't have any claim to Westeros, he conquered it with his family, dragons, and army. What Robb is doing is the same, minus the dragons. |
![]() ![]() great chapter.. robbs speech in the end.. need some work |
![]() ![]() Bueno esto es hermoso mi niño sabe que la silla no se moverá así que es bastante inteligente que ponga en orden los Reinos antes de tomar su legítimo derecho a la tostada los reclamos El sur necesita de un nuevo orden y mi lobo lo hará |
![]() ![]() Siii mi hermoso rey tu sabes hacer las cosas bien has conseguido una gran pareja ahora si que venga los enemigos |
![]() ![]() Me siento mal por sentirme bien por lo que le hicieron a Sansa es que aun tengo coraje de lo que le hicieron a mi querido Ned ahora cuando llegue al norte si es que llega y no se queda en el sur debe de hacer mucho para borrar lo que hizo no tanto para su familia sino para el Norte |
![]() ![]() MI REY te adoro tu sigue así corazón vence a todos salva a tu familia y a tu reino solo así podrás llevar tu legado a nuevas alturas |
![]() ![]() Eso mi niño ha hecho grandes movimientos sin duda algunos han salido bien otros no tantos pero se han hecho grandes cambios sin duda vamos Robb saca tu Rey interior |
![]() ![]() SIII MI Joven lobo sabe cosas me llena de orgullo se que podrá prevalecer y salvar a su familia y al Reino de los caminantes blancos, llego la hora de que el Norte les recuerde por que son uno de los Reinos más Antiguos |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm pleased the way the story went I'm pleased your SI didn't spend half his bloody life inventing products And preeaching how clever he is How however I would have liked to have had more thoughts of your character thinking Not from the view of other people would have liked to seen their struggles dilemmas especially when trying to remember the TV or book series and whaat assassinns he sent to deal witth the Dragoon Queen Really loved and appreciated the story |
![]() ![]() Rob Stark is basing his claim to the throne of westeros on what exactly? Robert Baratheon was made King by right of conquest of even more so because his grandmother was a literal targaryen...Stannis, Renly, & all roberts childrens claims are based of the same shared Targaryen ancestery...So rob stark just up and naming himself King of the 7 kingdoms of westeros is blatenly retarded & bad writting. Rob doing doing so is basically openly declaring himself an enemy to all of westeros...author needs to do way more research cause this is just laughable. |
![]() ![]() Was a good story...up till now...the alliance with the Tyrells is very FORCED. One Margery is already known to be used goods. Marrying her after having previously married renly would bring huge troubles if she quickly becomes pregnate. Two now that he's married how is he gonna deal with the Dragon Queen? Would have made wayyyyy more sense trading one of kevan lannisters sons for Sansa & then betrothing her to one of Mace Tyrells sons...The Reach/North alliance was honestly just super lazy writing in order to force the plot along in a certain(Shitty) direction. I wish the story luck but ive lost faith in the quality at this point... |
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![]() ![]() Absolutely loved it Hope u update quickly |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good story so far, I hope you can update soon to see Stanis prisoner and sent to the Wall, and Davos alive can hardly wait for the next chapters |