Good job with ramsey

Is Arianne pregnant? Theon's child?

Dany is a complex thanks to that author of the novels and the TV series, she turn from a sweet young woman into a mad woman, all because they love to twist all our favorite characters around and let them drop dead. Dany was one of many such characters like Robb and so many others...

Ooowwwww don’t tell me Theon has pulled an Edward Cullen was it? The twilight guy… Man how I hated my GF making me sit through those movies It was 2010 and she wanted to see the one in theaters but she had me watch the previous ones and all the sequels. I guess it could have been worse after all she did give me something in return

Theon no futuro sera mais famoso que Brandon o construtor, Daemon Targaryen, Corpos Velaryon, por ele fez o que os outros não fizeram. Colocaram grandes cidades de essos de joelhos. .

Poor Tyrells

First person pov for multiple characters is a poor writing choice and can outright make your characters OOC if you dont know how to write or phrase the way they think. I hope with all of my being that you are able to differentiate your different POVs in thier entirerty but i have been nothing but burned by similar writing in the past. Here's a drink to you hopefully proving me wrong in the next chapters!

Thank you for keep writing this fic. The Tyrells were the most functional family in Westeros, they really loved each other. But now, their desire for power has alienated a member of their family. They think the actions of Loras are made of hurt and he can come back to them, so they have little guilt in using them. Garlan didn't hear what Loras said, "I have no brother, no family and no home. This will be the burden that will bury the Tyrells in their own ambition.

It's written just disgusting, as if an imbecile was writing. Have you heard anything about synonyms, metaphors, complex sentences, etc.? I am generally silent about the huge number of typos. I hope the author will continue to write better, otherwise I feel like I'm getting dumber with every sentence.

Nice story up till now.
Sorry but I'm not interested in Euron II

Not sure I like him marrying the whore of the East but he’s been a simp for a while now.

Thank you, I can't wait for the next chap.
Well it's like the prologue of season 2. lol

Been missing this story for months. Hope there’s a new chapter coming up soon!

This book is a trap. There is absolutely nothing in it that could be called humor. No funny situations, no jokes, nothing positive at all. Only endless suffering, overcoming and whining of the main character. I will not touch on the other aspects of the book, they are normal. The problem is that you see the Genre - Humor and happily go to clear your head from everyday worries, and instead you get a huge dose of depression and frowning eyebrows.

Pfft, it took half of the first chapter to realize that the hero is a pathetic nobody. The same can be said about the author, in the end it was he who fucked up this nonsense.