The story is quite intriguing but you have to look past the transplantation of organs from magical creatures with little to no side effects. Still looks like a promising story so far.

"And as much as Bill was not the man she had needed he was a good dragon handler."

You have the brothers mixed up. Charlie was the dragon handler, Bill worked as a curse breaker for Gringotts.

I am absolutely in love with this story, and am incredibly happy that whoever you are, are on this earth, and am anticipating and excited to read the next chapter when ever it come out.

I cannot express how much I love this story! it's so good!

hahaha naughty myrtle xD so forward and playful, that side of her is refreshing. honestly I love how fleur is the one asking Harry on dates, it's quite cute. and their intimacy level is steadily increasing, seems fleur is comfortable essentially beating all of herself to Harry now, a skip really doesn't leave much to the imagination ;p and Harry is far more comfortable around her like that now as well :3

I do hope they don't go overboard on the body modifications though .-.

hmm, they are dating and sleeping together now, there's no reason to shy away from each others bodies when in states if undress xP

I truly do think she should have opened up to him sooner. communication and trust are I portant in any healthy relationship. but I guess I can understand why she was hesitant. Harry truly does deserve someone who will be honest and forthcoming though. hows he to know she won't hide stuff from him going forward? That she'll trust him enough to be honest and open? At least she did tell him her secrets.

that said, the fluff in the last part of this chapter was so wholesome and heartwarming! I love how they transitioned so naturally into being together. I also love how harry reassured her about her past mistakes. the amount of affection she shows Harry is amazing as well :3

Are you gonna continue your Lonely Letter or is that story on hiatus? because that story is great

wow he took that way better than I thought he would. not even upset that she didn't trust him with the truth or that she liked to him for so many years,? not even asking her to make a cow to never lie to him again? No consequences at all?

so there's another change she made...less need to worry changes happening going forward right?

that aside, that bed sharing scene was adorable :3

soooo when's she going to going to tell him everything? at this point I'd feel pretty betrayed when she finally did tell me.

she missed another perfect chance to be honest to Harry and open up. Its getting extremely frustrating that she's keeping him in the dark still...

at least she told him she loved him. that's something

she's had several chances to tell him about that portal mirror and that they could hang out. he even point blank mentioned it when she was in Gryffindor robes. that was a golden opportunity. why is she being dishonest. I get she wants to keep the timeline mostly the same but she's already changed things and hanging out some wouldn't change much more.

haha her flashing him was unexpected but nice. he won't be so oblivious to girls or dense maybe :p

so it's pretty cute how focused she is on Harry and how affectionate she already is. when's she gonna tell him about the future and what they mean to each other? Can't imagine Harry taking it well if she keeps it from him for years, ot finds out she could have helped him have a better childhood himself. she internalizes giving herself a better childhood after all so it's only fair she tries to help him get the same.

love the story so far tho! it has alot of potential and I sincerely hope for tons of fluff :3