Oh painful, I loved it! Now I feel the need to see any episodes that referred to this and reread the manga...

This is one of the most beautiful Sanzo stories I have ever read. You captured his personality so perfectly, everything he must have been going through at that moment. You'd swear it was actually a scene from the cartoon itself because its written so well :) Sanzo's my favorite character and I really love reading stories where you get to see his more vunerable side. Thank you so much for writing this story! :) I look forward to reading more :)

This is very good. I loved how you sifted through his thoughts in a completely natural way.

Delicious angstiness. Even if I did read it over the summer. I think.
But then again, more reviews are good for the ego, right?

At the front I was quite blur but in the end I finally understood! Yea! And the last sentence was GREAT! Like it!

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Fuuei

Oh wow. That was angsty without being cliched. That was really good. I liked the way you wrote his feelings. Very well written.

Mouse

Very well written, very Sanzo like. Well done!

YunCyn.

Wonderful style... I love this piece. You are such a good writer. Keep up the good work! You're doing so well!

~Yumeneko/Hibiemi

This was well done. I liked the way you wrote Koryu's (Sanzo) angst. He was bitter, self-reproachful, trying to deny his weakness, yet his admittance of it was the saving grace that held him up afterwards.

Thank you for writing this, I liked it. (I hope you /will/ write more fiction for this fandom, because a writing talent such as yours would be really appreciated.)

Lovely. Your writing drew me right into the story, right into the character's thoughts and feelings. It was angsty without being cheesy, corny or simply passe. Do write more... the Saiyuki fandom needs your talents. _

i found your fic coz you posted a link on the saiyuki ml.

sugoi! i can't find the words to describe it. it's really good. the repetition of certain important concepts are really felt in the story. this review sucks, sorry, i'm not that good in expressing myself. but the story is really good. i especially like the ending.

Nicely-written, with deep feelings. Aw, Kouryuu's a dear...oops, mustn't forget he's now Sanzou...

BTW, I've checked up my own manga-doesn't Kouryuu call Koumyou 'oSHIshou-sama'?

When I first read the summary, I just KNEW I had to read & review it. I love Koryu fics _ And this one was just heart-breaking. Poor young Genjo Sanzo...but that would be exactly how he would've felt, ne? *sobs* The poor dear...loved the fic. Do write more.

Nice fic!

You are good with angst!