I don't know or care who dobbed in Harry. There were plenty of witnesses to Harry taunting Voldemort and claiming the Elder Wand.

I would love to see what happened after Harry is thrown through the Veil. Does the Ministry get into Dumblefore's tomb to "check out" the wand. I bet that wand has gone inert.

How does the Ministry justify the execution of Harry - for killing Voldemort, for having been a Horcrux, or possessing the Deathly Hallows? In the second case, shouldn't Ginny Weasley be sent through the Veil as well? If possession of the Elder Wand, shouldn't the Ministry gp after Dumblefore, sending his mouldering body through the Veil?

who's rhe third person voice that speaks on their mind and why aren't they more alarmed by it?

I enjoyed the story very much. Especially seeing this new Tom Riddle who has channeled his ambition into a new, better life for himself.

So, why did Kingsley, a bunch of unknown Aurors abd a few Unspeakables get so paranoid about Harry Potter’s magical legacy as an human Horcrux who is very powerful at 18..? So he tries to coerce a confession out of the Saviour? Of greater concern, certain people covet the Death Stick. Harry claims it’s buried with Dumbledore. The powers that be do not believe him.

So, who blabbed about the Horcruxes? A jealous, drunk or livid Ron Weasley is the usual suspect. Rob is both hot-headed and incapable of keeping a secret when riled.

Hermione Grainger is less likely to leak the Horcrux tale as she would have been more concerned with (1) Finding her Parents Down Under and/or (2) returning to Hogwarts for an “8th Year and her NEWTs.

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I'm glad that you had Harry have a conversation with this world's Dumbledore. This world's Sirius Black and Remus Lupin are probably dead due to his machinations gone wrong. I expected a little more of a tour of the world, but the emotional beats and relationship parts were important and well for crafting and sharing the tale.

So, I'm really glad that this isn't the last chaptre, that there will be some kind of examples of the life after this moments.

Interesting twists. Also some good world-building and tour stuff.

Yep, all Harry ever wanted was to be listened to, cherished, and trusted.

Hmm. Harry seems to be only slightly less emotionally stunted that Riddle here.

Visiting this angsty what if the for the first time. Well done stuff.

This was so good! I like the characters a lot and how they got together. Both strong characters too.

Ed Eccomi alla fine.
L’ho adorato!
Questa storia è entrata nella mia top ten. Tom e Harry sono adorabili insieme. Strepitoso!
Complimenti vivissimi!

Pensavo di scrivere una recensione alla fine della storia, ma non ho resistito. È fantastico! Semplicemente bellissima! Adoro la tua scrittura. Sono grata alla tua acuta e irrefrenabile fantasia da va scrittore. Hai scritto tantissimo su questo sito ed io non posso essere che grata e contenta di poter leggere storie meravigliose come questa. Complimenti!

You know, it would be amusing as hell to see Tom figure out a way to reach Harry's original world, and then team him up with Harry, Ron, and Hermione to go on a (totally justified) rampage...