Hmm so Bella has found her shield. Was that Charlie trying to get Bella. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Oh no I hope the Cullen’s can help Charlie and cure him of this virus. Alice’s vision of him was kind of interesting though even though Bella wouldn’t want to be changed. Hope for more real soon.

nice work!

Hmm wow what has Charlie become. Interesting story so far. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

really enjoying this so far. well done

Thought it was a human turned vampire, but it sounds like it's something worse as it is described as a creature.

:)

So many questions you have running through my mind! I love the intrigue rather than just the hearts and kisses that you normally find in these tales. I am looking forward to seeing where you are going to go with this.

great story. eagerly waiting for more

I loved their playful teasing in this chapter. And wow! Charlie barely escaped that encounter, and I seriously doubt anyone is going to believe him!

holy shit, I need another update asap. that was intense, I hope Charlie's going to be okay after that.

Bella and Edward seem to have fallen for each other hard! I loved the playful teasing and was surprised your Bella doesn't shy away from voicing her thoughts. I look forward to their little date! Thanks for writing.

thoroughly enjoying!

Simply loving it. More pls

Thanks!