Reviews for Deflating
dogwater chapter 11 . 11/27/2022
doesn't Stalking Lily Evans: Part Two spell out SLEPT? i mean probably not the best word to name his operation, but not so bad considering SPEW
phoebesparrow chapter 10 . 6/16/2020
hey, I liked this chap!
phoebesparrow chapter 2 . 6/16/2020
its great!
Guest chapter 12 . 9/14/2019
Best fanfic i ever read.. Man it feels so real..
Guest chapter 5 . 8/14/2019
Ooh not sure if Lily’ll enjoy him calling her Subject...
Kittycorn8 chapter 20 . 7/2/2019
Do me a favor and update. Please!
writeringoodfaith chapter 14 . 2/19/2019
That last line gives me Anne of Green Gables vibes.
writeringoodfaith chapter 9 . 2/19/2019
I'm glad he apologised for that kiss. It was prick-ish. Ugh
writeringoodfaith chapter 5 . 2/19/2019
Ooh just realised this is dated pre-HPB. Ok. No Prince's Tale. *mentally noted*
writeringoodfaith chapter 4 . 2/19/2019
James is a crackpot and I love it. I love the diary stalking and the reporting to friends.
writeringoodfaith chapter 3 . 2/19/2019
I think that was actually really insightful of Sirius. James is ready to learn! Can't believe he hasn't turned his mind to this train of thought before actually.
writeringoodfaith chapter 2 . 2/19/2019
I forgot to say last chapter, but the mum/sister line was golden. It's so true too. It is their favourite compliment.
writeringoodfaith chapter 1 . 2/19/2019
Bwahahaha this is so great! I am so pleased to make this find. It's been so long. I can't even envision a world where James's "deflating" wasn't a huge part of them getting together... Super excited for what comes next!
Guest chapter 20 . 2/16/2019
I can’t even call home just hold it would be underrating him, Sirius Black was a bloody diamond
Guest chapter 14 . 2/16/2019
Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous.
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