Reviews for On Blue Wings |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well I'm going to start off with it's good to see you writing fanfiction again, I am happy to see a variation of Naruto as a phoenix that doesn't start off as either him being Riser or immediately bashing Riser as a character (even though that seems to have been his purpose initially as a character). I like what I have read and I look forward to any future updates. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The plot is fine imo, but a beta would help, saw some typo here and there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter! Glad to see you back |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it, i love the reaction of seek about hanekawa xd |
![]() ![]() ![]() what I can say is a good chapter, curious for the next one. maybe you can write a story narutoxgame of thrones |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah your back thats good Like this and looking forward to seeing where this goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good to see you kinda back at fanfiction. I enjoyed this a good bit, has a nice flow and decent humor to it so far so hopefully this trend continues and only gets better as the story progresses. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Does Naruto have memories of the ninja world? And also does the Azure flames have to do anything with Marco from one piece? |
![]() ![]() ![]() A surprise to be sure, but a welcome one. I haven't read a seen an update from you in a long while. I really enjoyed this Naruto is a cool Phenex and a king too. There aren't enough King Naruto stories , they're all servant Naruto. I love that you made Naruto engaged to Seekvaria and are using Hanekawa, both are quite unique and I think it's awesome. You wrote everything excellently. Thank you for this story. |