Reviews for A Game of Chance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() great fic. The kara percy dynamic was somthing never thought of but well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice job with this chapter. Diana needs to fix her mistake though. You never betray family the way she did |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still hoping for an update on this one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Spending several chapters seeing the character I wanted to see being a puppet isn't very interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please Update. I loved this story and can't wait to hear more or rather read more. |
![]() ![]() This is a great story I hope you update it soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why you decided to have Percy have such a dark start is beyond me. Good story but all the angst makes it bad. |
![]() ![]() Why does Percy progressively turn into a bitch? actually one of the worst takes on this kys |
![]() ![]() ![]() can you please continue this it's a great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Mythical side of the family". Do you understand what the term "myth" means? Or is this more subconscious paganphobia fueled by abrahamism. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh now I remember this work. Respect the quality writing but from what I remember the plot is shit. Percy being brainwashed by mortals... weak gods... etc etc... Good luck though |
![]() ![]() ![]() New fanfic Idea. Percy is a distant descendant of Lucifer and the son of Poseidon. His abilities are super strength, super speed, energy creation manipulation and absorption, and elemental creation manipulation and immunity. His strength and speed will fall somewhere between Wonder Woman's and Superman's. If you take it, I'd like the world were a combination of Young justice, Justice League, Justice League Unlimited, and the animated movies, like in A New Life by The Ethereal Lord. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting premise hop you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. Cripplebeth. |
![]() ![]() I don't feel like it makes much sense for Percy to suddenly cough up all his info and trust them. I also feel like you portray it like Percy was wrong for not telling them his secrets but he doesn't even really know them and they put a freaking chip in his neck. Which I don't feel like Percy would've let them do it as easily. They kept threatening to throw him in Tartarus, which I don't think they'd ever do because it's too severe for people who won't even kill the joker, but he could easily run away and work with the light(Not that he would) or something because they threatened him with that. |