Ok I don't know if you will read this but I really enjoyed your story so far.
I do think you have Harry as a no m orals horny ass, that could potentially ruin the story, I hope not but it's one of the better crossover pics out there, I do hope you continue with it..

Damn this is the most disgusting Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read, I'm liking the world building but the whorish interaction of the females character and the incestuous feeling of female relatives to Harry is really cringe, can't believe you're turning the women here into sluts and I'm pretty it will be an NtR theme here in the future

You have a very interesting story here.. i dont mind fast phase sometimes it’s preferable at this stage so a bit of time skip is also welcome up to his teen years. But please no incest.. by the way thank you for sharing this story

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

AN: I'll try to be more consistent
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Binged this all and have to say, pretty good too

Extremely interesting story! Hope you update soon :D

Harry really can't be disappointed with Rose being in slytherin, should've let the hat sort him. You take Harry's obsession with freedom too far to the point where he wouldn't even trust an expert in their field of study whish is just ridiculous

Please update soon! They don’t really need the red sand. Harry’s pheremones would do the trick, and since the indoctrination is pheremone basded; then simply giving them a dead cleaning should do the trick.

I don’t like this dungeon idea. The gamer is one thing, but it should at least stick to a story. Adding side quests which are complete steps out of reality, destroys the fic

Huh, I expected harry to do the standard: kneeling, hands behind head, surrounded by swarm of shield agents. Not, run off.

Really awesome fic can't wait for more

Looking forward to the next chapter! Really enjoying this story

I think you got it wrong with the money since he wouldn't get paid $960 a day or $30K a month since that would mean he is being paid to work 24/7 7 days a week which is unlikely.

his tein is annoying af imo.