Reviews for Mystique Soldier |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Congrats on being alive. Good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simple but entertaining chapter and nice fight, glad you returned |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter~~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great stuff, thx! To your health! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you going to continue the mortal god of olympus or did you drop it i have been waiting for it for quit a while now please let it continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not sure if you've been notified of this, but there's a small inconsistency. In chapter 1, you had Harry as age/level 10, but in chapter 2 it was age/level 8. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are making kids sexual too soon. Espetially Harry with the past you gave him. He would have been late bloomer or asexual. Without thet this would be readable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yo this is a great story! You should really update it please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry with the way you use gamers mind is honestly stupid and i cant seem to like him as he has no personality, gamers mind blocks emotional effects when they affect the mind like when he was getting turned on when Natasha locked her legs around his waist gamers mind if it was active at the time would of pushed it down and not removed the emotion completely doing so just turns Harry into a drone even with GM off he still has no personality that pulls me in at this point im only here waiting for the inevitable blow up |
![]() ![]() ![]() what was the point in him calling shield if he was going to leave anyway |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that’s just lazy writing, with how he cold and isolated he is slytherin would have been the optimal choice. Oh well lets see where you take this, good storytelling so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I miss this fic |
![]() ![]() Please don't let this be dead |
![]() ![]() Yo bro! Really liked this fic. Keep up the good work and post regularly. Wishing you luck in your future endeavours. |
![]() ![]() your explanation doesn’t make much sense; he literally just has horrible anger management issues and it doesn’t fit his character at all, even with his random “logic” tacked on |