I think the complaints are coming from people who've read similar HP/Marvel crossover fics that often have the tropes they're complaining about, and when they see the first signs of those tropes happening in this fic, too, they're making silly assumptions and prematurely attacking the fic based on things they're predicting will happen.

why did you have to ruin it with the incest BS. this was such a good fic.

why did he join shield i though he didn't want to get involve with shield and hydra's war

It makes no fucking sense to put him in Gryffindor and his sister in Slytherin. At this point the whole story is turning into shit. Harry is too different to be hanging out with people like Ron and Hermione or whoever. The summary tag stated dark and insane yet all we got was an emotional emo protagonist who the author is trying to fit a mold he clearly doesn’t fit. I cannot stomach this anymore.

I really enjoy lots of parts about this story, especially the first 10-15 chapters. The world feels creative and interesting and well planned out. I say this first so the criticisms I give later are understood as coming from a place of love, rather than emotionless flaming. That being said, I've gained some concerns about this story after the last few chapters. Two majors ones.

For one, the story started out with Harry having, what i like to call, gamer-lite powers; the only thing really affected by his gamer abilities is himself. His stat sheet is just a summary of his abilities or a guide to gaining power. I like this type of game system more since it is still a powerful ability, but not too plot controlling and where the chapters become more text box than actual story.
However, recently this has changed; shifted to an OP, reality warping, plot controlling tool where I personally tend to lose interest. Hard to feel any tension when his gamer abilities are able to give OP powers and perks, control god like beings like Odin and the Ancient One (with the time stone), and eventually give the ability to hop across the multiverse. It takes all the tension away. Every skill he levels up loses meaning since he'll inevitably buy something much better from the game shop sometime in the future. Who cares how hard he trains or how fast or slow he is at learning new things when his gamer powers control how quickly plot events happen? All the suspense and tension is lost because Harry is the all powerful main character, around which the universe revolves. It makes me feel like if he died, all that would happen is him unlocking the "SAVE" or "LOAD CHECKPOINT" ability.

Second, I was under the impression that this was going to be a story about an abused and emotionally traumatized child soldier trying to regain his humanity, and maybe that is what it will be eventually, but i'm losing faith. The author is constantly dropping hints about Harry's slowly growing emotional awareness, but lots of times it's one step forward and two steps back. I'm starting to think that, in the end, Harry will be morally grey at best, probably more in the lawful evil category. I don't feel like he really wants to get better, nor is any other person around him pushing him to be. The most that's changed is Harry using emotions to manipulate and seduce people or him threatening to murder a bunch of kids because they accidentally hurt his sister a little; not really progress.

So overall, the multiverse spanning adventure of an all powerful, psychotic, murderous gamer isn't really my cup of tea. I'm not sure that's where this is going, but i'll be really disappointed if that's where we end up. The story is good enough that i'm going to stick with it for now, but i'm worried.

The fuck did the guy 3 reviews below me just say?

The fuck did the guy below the guy below me just say?

the fuck did the guy below me just say?

why not have harry play with lily's tits... sucking on them cause perverted boy is thirsty and hungry?

I hope he will never blush etc. It will just kill this fic.

Looking forward to the next chapter. It's been a fun ride so far. Eager to see how Harry develops.

Well I can tell who the asshole is here. You bitch about Plums when they're a million times better than you could ever hope to be... you insensitive egomaniac

to be fair I always thought it was B's that you could just have a better broom in quidditch matches

does there still comes an update

Love this story