Reviews for Mystique Soldier |
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![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh the old "all the cliches nojutsu" for Buckey to escape was a disappointment. Then the heartwarming bit with Harry helping Nat was cool. Right up till I remembered he is 11. Can we not do the creepy sexpest kid thing anymore please? Well written story regardless thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Logic is universal, you cannot change it, any more than you can change your gender." Damn, I wish more people had this logic lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rereading this as it's been a while since I last did but going through this chapter I just got an idea! This isn't about this chapter so if anyone reads this that's not past it ignore me. Okay so we know in the future dorea is on better terms with Harry right? And we know Diggorys team messed with tonks not Diggorys fault but more Weasley so I'm thinking maybe harrys team doesn't get say one member or maybe someone drops out last second. Couldn't harry accidentally or on purpose get revenge for tonks by asking dorea to switch teams? And seeing as she's now on better terms and trying to get along more with her family wouldn't she jump at that chance?... Just a thought though |
![]() ![]() ![]() just read the entire story and seems like a harem: Natasha, Maria Hill, Agent 33(forgot her name), lilly, his sisters, Daphne and Sara Lupin |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry arguing with the system was fun. Also, nicely done strengthening the relationship. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao Harry seems intent on having everyone be his "friend". I wonder if Rose will tattle to Lily and we'll be treated to a "talk" from Lily? Could be hilarious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's amusing how Harry is beating random bullies left and right and gets no punishment from the staff, lol. |
![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter. Hoping for regular updates this year. |
![]() ![]() ![]() b4 u start the marvel plot , atleast let harry have graduated from hogwarts i hate him being a little shit in a room full of grownups and honestly the thing with him being 11 and wanting to fuck full grown woman is to much hentai lol , atleast let him grow up to be 15 or something |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. |
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![]() ![]() Absolutely loving the story, can't wait for more. Happy new year. |
![]() ![]() ![]() and happy New Year |