Reviews for Mystique Soldier |
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![]() ![]() Absolutely loving the story, can't wait for more. Happy new year. |
![]() ![]() ![]() and happy New Year |
![]() ![]() ![]() also forgot about this but looking forward more of your work. |
![]() ![]() The mc should really grow the fuck up already, him being this edgy is hurting the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() cant wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() if birthday bonus applies to any/all quest rewards on birthday then you should have his daily quest reward doubled too, or have him yet to complete it when the spar happens in order to keep the double for birthday an unknown until after spar |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't tell if Diggory was simply scalped or O-Ren Ishii'd. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ¡Me encanta esto! Y definitivamente voto por una ficción seria con un tono oscuro |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another enjoyable chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Isn’t Harry like 11 and Natasha at least in her mid 20s? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far for this arc you did good just stuck to canon too much like you were afraid to deviate too much like you did with his family and the strength of the HP universe cause the character you painted so far would of learned as much about hogwarts as he could and most likely choose ravenclaw so he wouldn't have to deal with the kids as much and while the paring's aren't bad Fleur is a basic and frankly boring choice compared to some of the other girls in HP but not a bad choice just boring and overused and with his elder sister I don't mind but the fact that she's a oc is iffy because there very difficult to make readers like them and since she's playing a big role she can ruin the story pretty easily if she's not written well but that's it for now I have more to say but I'll say it in the next review if I feel like it's important to pint out. |
![]() ![]() I have been waiting for this update for a long time. It was amazing. Happy new year:-) |
![]() ![]() Lets goooo! Your finally back |
![]() ![]() I enjoyed this chapter very much. The action was great and the aftermath of the fight was enjoyable to read too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you continue the mortal god of olympus please |