Reviews for Mystique Soldier |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ha ha! ringing in the new year with an awesome chapter for Mystique Soldier. love how badass Taskmaster was in this. as soon as i saw that name i knew Harry wasn't going to win this fight. as much as Taskmaster not dying is a lost fight anyway. was worried Bucky was going to die or survive in some pathetically convoluted way. but getting the jump on Nat while Harry takes on Taskmaster was well done. he he. Widow orgy now THAT would have been awkward to explain to Nat. glad to see you're back, hope for another chapter soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh this is so forced |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great chapter! It's definitely your best fic and as far as Harry Potter/Marvel crossovers and Gamer fics go it is one of the best. This is a unique Harry who is OP, cold and ruthless but has a heart and charm to him only few fics can actually pull off. All the female characters have "character" - they're not just lovesick puppies but actually have a reason to feel the way they do about Harry. Especially this chapter with Natasha truly made this fic one of the best out there! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Y feliz año al resto tambien Entre la espera de esta capitulo y lo que iba a ocurrir estaba emocionado, y he salido después de leerlo casi completamente complacido; el casi es algo en lo que muchos estaban de acuerdo, ¿¡Porqué en el nombre de todo lo sagrado, el chico agente especial de élite profesional y con la capacidad de negar emociones en cualquier momento, se deja llevar por un alboroto de venganza completamente innecesario en ese momento, cuando pudo haber terminado al soldado so realmente quería matarlo mucho antes, como puede subertimarlo a ese nivel, sabiendo de donde viene el cabrón, sales de lidiar con una decena de viudas, y luego cuando llegas a tu momento cumbre, la cagas por algo básico como el jugar con tu enemigo; aun sabiendo todo de lo que es capaz?! Es que no jodas maldita sea, te da un bajón ver que actúa como un Tom Riddle adolescente con Harry en CoS que como el agente de élite que es. Espero que no acabara así solo porque lo necesitas para algo mas adelante al igual que TM; porque si hay algo peor que cagarla irracionalmente, es usas e la cagues irracionalmente por el guión. Pero el cap me gustó, al menos hasta esa parte. Y ojala no te perdamos de vista otros 8 meses xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome chapter, happy new year, cant wait or the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. Hoping for the best |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the chapter! I love this story so much! Do you have plans for The Mortal God of Olympus? |
![]() ![]() ![]() rob is not back, dont let him lie to you, he promised me a chapter of his other story 3 months ago and never delivered, this will be most likely be his last time online until 2030. |
![]() ![]() ![]() welcome back author-san! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rob is BAAAAACCKKK! HAPPY NEW YEAR! |
![]() ![]() Are we going to get a smut scene with Rose and Harry? I’m waiting to read that steamy scene. |
![]() ![]() I skipped ahead from ch 15 and speed read to ch 24 just to make sure you didn’t have rose r*ped by the Slytherin and also let’s have harry/rose/lily |
![]() ![]() Sorry but no Lilly and harry does it for me that’s one of the things I liked about your other fanfic and it does fit. Especially with how you have it set up him not doing it actually implies in the future he does start to turn good or is a lot more emotional. And you have hinted at him being characters little bitch a few times he is following everything his mother has said is already trying to comfort his sister and ignoring the fact he knows she is faking her stuttering and stuff and it irritates him yet he doesn’t tell her to quit it or anything. You also have the fact that just now he wants a broom nut is following his mothers orders who is suddenly bossing him around after he already talked about it and why is harry who had trouble changing his sleeping schedule after his escape and still only did a bit suddenly able to adapt to the time change. Also you may want to think of this story from the perspective of an American because it’s where harry grew up with shield and all his care takers and people he grew knew growing up were from. For example most Americans actually hate English food and in the beginning you were dissing the American measurement system which if you learn it the British one is the that could seem weird in the same way that you mentioned just opposite. So try imagining a bit of this story as an American because it is basically what harry is at this point and what he grew up as. I agree with him going to hogwarts but he is not dumb enough to suddenly believe Lilly’s lie that it’s the best wizarding school in the books I think they straight up mention it fell off or something like that I know it used to be. But ya harry has become to “Good” at this point for it to be reasonable or acceptable to the people you have reading it it is why you have already lost well over 95 percent of your viewers at this point you change to what people like and dislike to much and because of it someone who drops it early from something may like it now but they already dropped it and now those who liked it are dropping it because of the change. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is retarded. You are retarded. You're even now begging for money for this trash. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stop. Switching. Tenses. And. Learn. To. Spell. |