Reviews for Mystique Soldier |
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![]() ![]() I prefer a dark and serious story with small amounts of Deadpool type insanity/fun. (He did after all sleep with death once) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Smut fic. Background plot is my vote. Send him out to seduce his mum. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting premise, I'd say got with fun/smutty/serious |
![]() ![]() ![]() serious and obscene |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok now this is interesting is Harry Gonna get better or worse mentally? Because a few things that can make him stronger might make his mind worse or end up as a serious version of deadpool Like say he becomes a werewolf later on and given how werewolves are in Harry Potter it might affect his mental health more….. Pls tell me Harry goes full wolf I don’t get to see that many werewolf gamers if not I understand |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice work on the story. And I'll say, go with Option 3. A serious tone qith some smut. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I quite like fics that are dark and serious, but with a sprinkle of fun and smut. The tone and atmosphere in this first chapter was good, but too much of it can get kinda gloomy. So yeah, some fun stuff, some smutty stuff every now and then can balance out the dark and serious stuff. Good luck and looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() honestly full blown smutty one. mortal gods should be the really serious one. let gamer harry bang ladies the ladies and get the harem if he is inclined. |
![]() ![]() I suggest the third option for this story and I have enjoyed it so far and can’t wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can’t say much since this story is still in chapter 1 but so far so good. As for the tone going forward I’d say a mix of both would be good though I wouldn’t be opposed to one full of mostly smut. |
![]() ![]() Very interesting, this has potential. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has a lot of potential! I really enjoyed the first chapter. Personally, I feel that a more serious tone would be better, just to fully bring out its potential. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really nice story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() excited to see where thus one goes, would read each option but a mix is always fun |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it, Very Very MUCH! Following and waiting for the next update |