|Reviews for Minus the Crown|
| warrior of the nile chapter 3 . 6/7/2017
*squeals in delight* Oh my god! You cannot imagine how happy this makes me. I have been looking for this story for *years* now. I only vaguely remembered what it was about, only that is was really good. And it still is. I thoroughly enjoyed this - from plot to characterization. Finding this story has made my day! :)
| PokerPair chapter 3 . 2/16/2013
Interesting story you have here and I love how Yugi is a healer? physician here he helps people and I love how you differentiate a Pharoah from his original personality. .
| YukinoKara chapter 3 . 10/11/2010
Aww. What a sweet way to write such an interesting and (that I know of) unexplored idea.
I hadn't really thought of people in power having two sides, but you write it so well that it seems like I've been let in on a secret.
I like that you switched from used Pharaoh to using Yugioh after he took off his crown. It's a nice touch. :)
I love the way you write- extra information and new characters aren't boring, and just make the story even more cherishable.
Just saying, in chapter 2 you referred to Pharaoh as Yami. I'm not sure whether that was intentional or not, so I'm just letting you know. :)
I really enjoyed (procrastinating my homework) reading this story! It's so well written, and the end product is just beautiful.
| TexasDreamer01 chapter 3 . 10/5/2010
once an imp, always an imp. :D
| goddess-chan123 chapter 3 . 9/3/2009
oh, how cute! though it shold b rated 'T', that was 1 of the sweetiest yuugixyami(or atemu if perffered) stories ive read!
| VirgoP10 chapter 3 . 1/16/2009
I loved your Egyptian story! A Please look at my profile and tell me which couple you would like me to write about!
| redconvoy chapter 3 . 5/18/2008
cute story! I could see why it won! Good Work!
| hA-UkA chapter 3 . 3/15/2008
Aw, so sweet. I really like how you took the initiative to separate Atem and his title. A lot of forget the pharaoh and the person are separate.
| RAY and KATANA chapter 3 . 2/23/2008
This was probably the most well written, sentimental fanfic that I've read in a long time!
| ravanwolf chapter 3 . 2/21/2008
that was... Simply brilliant. As all your stories are proving to be...
As with YamiYuugi, I am systematically reading through all of your stories. And, as with YamiYuugi, I have read most of them and am struggling to find a fault.
Sorry if you wanted constructive criticism, with a story as good as this I can't find anything bad.
| Itallia chapter 3 . 9/25/2007
The crown part was good. Nice way to wrap it up.
| Itallia chapter 2 . 9/25/2007
Ah, I see the dilemma. Strange thing to name the pharaoh, though-Yugioh. I thought he was Atem/Atemu, or Yami, at least.
| Itallia chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Interesting first chapter. The idea of Yuugi having favor of a god and being a separate being from Yami is interesting.
| kurogandaa chapter 3 . 1/2/2007
oh. My. GOD.
That was wonderfull, every word of it, long live puzzleshipping angst! I loved the part when Yami was removing his crown, he was willing to give everything he was to make Yugi happy again.
Loved it, awesome work. :)
| kingleby chapter 3 . 12/7/2005
lol, that last part was so cute _