I have caught up from chapter 42 to the end of this chapter and can I just say... phenomenal. I love the relationship you've built between the girls and Harry, I really do love Harry and Fleur too. so many changes to Canon that makes things make more sense and end up better in the end. I really love sirius getting to live and be free! I love that the basilisk Venom actually eradicated the horcrux from Harry that was a delightful surprise. I love that Cedric lived, I hate that he was killed in Cannon. I love so much the friendship that Harry built with Victor and Ivan. you have so many elements that make this such a delightful story. The Easter egg several chapters back about what life would have looked like if Harry had had a life more like Canon was entertaining I enjoyed that little snippet. I cannot wait to see what else you have in store for us. I will apologize I haven't been on fan fiction and sometime I spend a lot of my time on a03. but I will be watching more closely for updates because I do enjoy this story quite a bit. thank you for writing and sharing this!

Really, things are moving fast now! Time to watch out everyone!

You tend to use 'ugh', an expression of disgust or dismay, instead of 'uh', which signifies hesitation. It's somewhat offputting to have people so frequently voicing disgust when the intent seems to be hesitation.

Correction: Medusa could *not* petrify Perseus through a reflectionhe used his mirrored shield to see her in order to attack her. Had she been able to petrify him through a reflection, that would have been the end for him.

Excellent work. Liked how there was a sort of clear theme of light and darkness when it comes to things happening, life, and events in general. Well done!

Seriously? You rate this M and then completely skip over the lemon scene this thing had been building up to for 56 chapters?

If you didn't want to write it thats fine, but rate it T. That way people will not get their hopes up for 56 chapters! Seriously almost dropped this fic just for that.

Good story

Great new chapter, thank you for posting it.

You meant "his fiancées now".
I always feel a tad intimidated by high school students with detailed and lofty ambitions since I never had any when I was that age ín the 1980s except for the vague "work at some job after geaduating from uni".

Well, that's not good that old Tommy boys most loyal followers (and Peter) have escaped from Azkaban, so here's hoping that it'll be a while before he plans to attack Harry, so that Harry and the others have time to prepare. I wouldn't be surprised if Harry's training will be intensified because of this, while the girls (and possibly Neville) will research how to best defeat them (with Hermione being at the head, of course)

Thanks for the chapter.
Harry's girls are certainly ambitious.

so far really good but there is a weird mix of present and past tense. Hope that changes in future chapters

This is EXACTLY what Harry is fighting for, and I don't blame him!

Sirius Black, the Dogfather (Godfather)!
I knew Harry would want to stay, until he gets married...

Me gusta como llevas hasta ahora el relato, me encanta cuando Harry no es un bobo y tiene un afan de aprender y no perder el tiempo. No entiendo por que Malfoy es tan problemantico con Harry si no hubo un conflicto entre ellos durante el encuentro en la tienda de tunicas, al ,enos no recuerdo que lo hayas descrito. Al fin que el problema entre Harry y Malfoy se agudizo cuando rechazo dos veces al rubio en el tren y en el lobby antes de entrar al gran salon para la seleccion( esto en el canon), que conste que no estoy diciendo que debas ajustarte al canon, por algo esto es una creacion de fans, solo espero un poco de explicitacion de los conflictos en su origen..
¿por que el padre de Hermione seria seguidor de un equipo de futbol americano? si en Inglaterra los que es popular es el Futbol o lo que los de EEUU llaman socker, en inglaterra lo mas popular es el futbol, el criquet, la equitacion y el tenis y tambien el rugby.