Reviews for Recnac Transfaerso
SiriusWolf chapter 13 . 9/23/2003
Great Job!~! What in the world is a 'Mary Sue'? I've heard it in many fics, and I have no idea what it means.

Nice fic so far!~!
Joe chapter 23 . 9/22/2003
I'm glad Eloise had a great time at the ball! Good to see Cho being cut down to size, too! :)

Please write more soon!
PussyKat chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
I just remembered I had a dream last night involving you putting that you weren't gonna carry on with this fic! Something to do with dragons. (I even DREAM about this site? How sad is that? very sad, that's how sad. Oh well :p) Please don't let this be true...

Oh and are the Dursleys gonna get punished for what they did to Harry? they can't be allowed to get away with stabbing him.

Blessed Be,

PussyKat chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
Yeah, another hospital scene would be good. I love hospital scenes! Am I weird? Er...actually, don't answer that...

You could have Harry collapsing and having to go to the hospital wing again while Kota is still at Hogwarts, that way the Stensons would find out. Just a suggestion.

Do more soon!

Blessed be,

SiriusWolf chapter 21 . 9/21/2003
I can't wait to see the Stenson's reactions!~! I think it should go like "He shouldn't have to die like this, no, any other way but this." Mr . Stenson whispered. But that's just my personal opinion, you can use it if you like, in case you're stuck on ideas.

Very good fic so far!~!

aka Sirius Black, Very Curious CAT, aka Sweet Sleek Slytherin ;)
SiriusWolf chapter 22 . 9/21/2003
You've got to show him fighting the cancer. Make it so its at least a little uneasy, maybe put him in the hospital one more time before he goes home or something, maybe bring someone in to tell Kota. Make it a little less boring, and I'm not easily bored by a fic.

aka Sirius Black

aka Very Curious CAT

aka Sweet Sleek Slytherin

please please please update soon, I'm getting really hyper waiting for the next chapter!~!
BratPrincess-187 chapter 23 . 9/21/2003
That last part about your friend and you had me laughing out loud! Real smooth of you! But anyways sorrie that I haven't been reviewing latly, I didn't have my computer and the school doesn't allow me to get on this site.

Ok way off topic! But real great chapter and thank you for that Cho Bashing! It was lovely! Can't wait till your next update...maybe you could have a bit of drama with Harry, like feeling faint or whatever!

Alright this is one of the longest review's so i'll end it here! Update soon.

Ps- Real smooth! 0)!

Much Love

AeternusX chapter 23 . 9/21/2003
very good D please continue.
SiriusWolf chapter 23 . 9/21/2003
Interesting, try adding a little more sciency stuff, maybe one more hospital scene before the... eh... 'final act' for lack of a better word.

aka Sirius Black

aka Very Curious CAT

aka Sweet Sleek Slytherin

PS: How often do you update? Please update soon!~! I love your story!~!
SiriusWolf chapter 19 . 9/21/2003
Very good, but i wsh you could make it long, and dont leave the notes for people at the end, I wish you would just put those in a separate chapter, so people don't have to go through all that to get to the bottom. just something to make it a little easier on some of the readers.

aka Sirius Black

aka Very Curious CAT

aka Sweet Sleek Slytherin
SiriusWolf chapter 16 . 9/20/2003
OK cliffie major, I love your story, its dramatic, exciting, and really scary and spooky.

aka Sirius Black

aka Very Curious CAT

aka Sweet Sleek Slytherin

(personal signature for stories I really love)
Catiechan chapter 23 . 9/20/2003
AW! Iloved it! And I can't wait for the next chapter, and don't forget about writing me a Harry and Sirius scene, I'm holding you on to that. Great chapter!.
meinien chapter 23 . 9/20/2003
i simply adore your fic! in fact, i liked it so much that i just had a marathon-reading time - update soon!

oh yeah, when's voldemort coming up? i understand you're building up the plot and all, but i'm just curious...
Eowyn of Ithilien chapter 23 . 9/19/2003
I feel so dumb...I just got back from a dance and I'm so tired! Yah, it was fun...I don't care for that r/b dancing, so my friends and I formed a reject circle and started dork dancing. In my opinion, the boys in your chapter were much more mature than the boys at our dance...they were acting like idiots around the girls...anywho...

Aw! That was so cool when Harry jumped in to help Eloise when the other girls were making fun of her.

Kota's reactions and reactions to Kotavery funny. I loved the questins they asked her. You've never seen Quidditch? Holy crap! You haven't lived! Hehe.

I loved the converstaion about Mr. Weasley! He sent a letter with questions to ask Kota! I love it! Could so picture it...just what questions were in the letter? I'm curious...

What else did I like?...Eloise's reaction to Roger dancing with her...“What? How? Why? Me? Huh?” I know the feeling.

Hehe...Harry sacrificed himself to Medusa...funny...OOh, guess what my school play is going to be about this's a greek tragedy...people eat their children...*yum, children* which is apparently not worse than marrying your own sister...go figure...

Wow...Cho was a total *bleepedy bleep bleeper*.

Cho: You can't say no to me! I'm the bestest bitch in the whole school...

Harry: Er...*turns her into oatmeal*

Wow...that's got to be the most stupid thing I've ever written. Okie dokie then. Tata.

To the reviewer CAIAPHAS: I don't know if anybody reads other ppl's reviews, but I was wondering if you, Caiaphas, were a fan of Broadway. Caiaphas is one of my fave characters in Jesus Christ Superstar.

Eowyn of Ithilien

What are post-it notes useful for, besides writing notes on? I'd really like to know.
Dadaiiro chapter 23 . 9/19/2003
Siting right next to your favorite author? well, it kind of happend to me U it ocured to me that I wanted to know this author, so I started to write to her. Who would have thought that I would meet her in the same city I was moving to. Now I can happyly say that we are best friends _ she lives really close to where I do, so we visit each other frecuantly. I cant believe we have so much in comon. Have you ever got a friend like that? like, you think the same about something, speack the same fraise or word at the same time, have likings really alike, T_T still searching for boyfriends. Hahahah!

but I do say, funny things usually happen to me still I'm happy for this one.

about your chapter, IT WAS GREAT!

The nervousness in both, Ron and Hermione, was really funny _ It was cool too how all the girls looked at Harry approvingly. He certainly has to be handsome, right? He looks like a clone of his father, and the books say that he was pretty much good looking, as Sirius was, so Harry must be as well.

Ravenclaw? I thought Eloise was Hufflepuff…

I just loved the part when Harry picks her up. When all these Slytherin girls where teasing her and Harry just came to scene to rub it on them that SHE was going with HIM. o lovely!

The questioning Kota got was really amusing the poor girl could barely catch it, for she was being bombarded with them. But I bet students where really interested. Being the first muggle (maybe in the whole previous Hogwarts’ history) to have set a foot in the school.

Hermione’s and Ron’s dance was soo00OO sweet! And cute, as Eloise puts it. It really is! When she rested her head in his shoulder, and he on her head. ;_; adorable.

Eloise, on the other hand, was so hilarious! It was really funny how she reacted after dancing with Roger. I’m glad that she has gotten the boy she has dreamed on having specially if she has already picked their future kids’ names, hahahaha!

Looks like little George is really getting to like Kota, right? Well, you kind of see that, even when he asked her what was her exactly relationship with Harry. Do you think he was kind of jealous?

Aw! I love that song! ‘Somewhere over the rainbow’. Its so sweet! I would definitely love to dance that with my boyfriend (if I had one…). I think I was kind of daydreaming when I read about Hermione and Ron kissing. It was really romantic! The whole ball was!

I sure liked this one. This chapter was really, Really interesting. It had of everything. Romance, humor, suspense (for poor Eloise when she was waiting to dance with her platonic love), and much, much more. Oh! And we cant forget about Harry complying Ginny. So, does that means he likes her? If he does, is he going to do something about that in the nearby future? ‘cause as he said back there, he doesn’t has much time.

Oh! I cant wait to read your next chapter! It doesn’t matters if you take a bit more time in updating, but I sure want to read it o

See you around!

Ps. You better lift your feet next time
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