EDI sure is one of a kind.

Aaaaaand now I'm confused. What is this 40k fukery in my Mass Effect?!

I was not expecting Warhammer elements. This will be fun. Just as long as it's only some borrowed elements and it remains grounded in the Mass Effect universe. No crazy shit like Chaos, Orks or tech priests.

This could use a good amount of proofreading and grammar work, but otherwise this is a pretty darn good start to an intriguing premise.

"We will watch your career with great interest!"

Wow, I am already Intrigued by this story, as it possesses potential.

There are rarely stories that show humanity controlling one system. Which is Sol, the premise of the story is interesting so is this chapter.

As it implied mankind has access to greater technology. And the fact the Turian fleet disappeared without warning one might think that humanity just attacked and defend their home system.

However, there is the fact that since the disappearance there has been no contact between humanity, and the citadel, which already paints a darker picture as to what is actually going on in the solar system.

Is it the reapers or something more dangerous?
I guess I would have to wait until the Next Chapter.

And I am looking forward to reading the next.

This is a great AU. Please keep this up. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Hmm

Tali sure has grown up a lot.

Update quickly, I’m intrigued

This has my interest, keep going.

That went well.

Super, merci. j'adore déjà ton premier chapitre.

This is an interesting idea. I'll definitely be reading this :)