I wish i could read these books somewhere. Is this one also going to be availeble on amazon and when? To bad i cant Get kindle unlimitid i My country.

Did you remove the chapters already? I was hoping to finish this story before it got taken down.

Could you please leave the story up for a few more days. I just started reading and would love to finish it

Very good story. Only thing is wish Darcy talked more to Lizzy than always thinking of kissing and lips and all those things.

Loved this story, thankfully I found it and was able to finish before you take it down.

Great writing and I look forward to reading more of your writing

thanks so much

EDITING SUGGESTION:

Nice ending! But I am sure in an earlier chapter (46). you describe Elizabeth’s ball gown as blue with dark blue embroidery from Ms Endersby collection-“a flattering light blue with dark blue embroidery.” Now you say she wears green to the ball?

I like the addition of the ball scenes. Has been a great story

Brilliant tale!

Thank you for this addition!

What a wonderful story. How nice that everyone seemed to enjoy the ball. Thank you !

I think that you probably meant to say "salon" instead of "saloon" in the 14th paragraph of chapter 4.

Thanks for sharing your story here. Very amusing dialogue. ;-) Well done!

I did go back and read the rewrite on chapter 48, and adding the ball was a good idea.

Same bullshit about Darcy not dancing with Elizabeth from lady matlock. Proud of other FF writers for handling this better and ensuring that Darcy danced the first, supper and last set with Elizabeth, not the shit written here.

Well, I have been off ffnet for a while and only just came back to finish this story. I wouod say christmas stories are fun any time, but i guess i am
a bit late to the party ti be answering, half way to next christmas!

Hope you recovered well from your illness last winter.