Reviews for Close Quarters |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is so sweet, I really enjoyed reading it |
![]() ![]() 48 pages and one would have expected them E&D to be married long before the last page. |
![]() ![]() Lady Matlock is annoying and interfering in every story and Darcy allows her to get her way. There are very few stories where the head of the Darcy Family stands up to the Fitzwilliams |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi. I've enjoyed your story. I liked your portrayal of both Darcy and Elizabeth and the language was good and it read smoothly. Thank you for writing this story. |
![]() ![]() Love it. Thank you for sharing... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for such a lovely lovely story...many thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for sharing your lovely story , well done . no need epiloge, now we have seen into a cosy future in close quarters . |
![]() ![]() ![]() of course they found a way out of scrutiny , but how will they manage that at the ball... Thank you for sharing your lovely story |
![]() ![]() Another great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic conclusion to your story. Enjoyed reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The first part of the story grabbed my attention and I very much enjoyed it; the ending was sweet but it felt incomplete. It might have felt less so if the last third of the story was more than just filler. With so much banality towards the end of the story, it needed the final payoff of their wedding, not just their engagement ball. Or if it did end here, less of the lead up of getting ready for the ball and more of the ball and interaction/reaction of the people at the ball. I don't think I would revisit the story for an epilogue but you would benefit from having one when you add it to Amazon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely peaceful ending to your story! Snuggling by the fireside in the library sounds like such a Darcy and Lizzy thing to do. May they enjoy it all through the epilogue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending came as a shock. But, it was still a perfect ending. All will be well with ODC. Unlike you, who is just so sick...get well soon! Yes, I would like a Christmas story. Even if it goes past Christmas. Who cares? Thank you for sticking to this story and completing it. Congratulations. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Darcy and Elizabeth ARE perfect for each other. And the viscount just found out. |