Reviews for Bitter Cold
StarDustTeen chapter 4 . 9/6/2014
yay, i have to read the story at THIS time...
Sora Loves Rain chapter 4 . 8/19/2014
Didn't expect her to be a death eater..
Nickie chapter 3 . 1/9/2012
Disturbing story. I don't even know why someone would write something like this.
Nickie chapter 3 . 1/9/2012
Disturbing story. I don't even know why someone would write something like this.
Musette Fujiwara chapter 4 . 11/16/2010
interesting... But what he said was true?
littlegraycloud chapter 2 . 1/24/2009

dont like this one eather...


ALittleinlove chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
This is a very interesting premise for a story and i look forward to reading more and seeing where you choose to take it.
Username-Is-Void chapter 4 . 10/13/2007
Ooh! ;} Way to get me hooked! Nice plot; I was skeptical at first... Who'd be able to write a great story where Hermione is a Death Eater?

Well, it seems you can. Update soon, please!

little-ms-devil chapter 4 . 1/28/2007
m, i love being malicious. a right slytherin myself. but let me guess- they will all end up on the side of good? yes, it IS the right thing. good writing by the way. and krux...a bit like krum and the ku klux klan. nice name. pity it doesn't fit her personality.
Lanetk chapter 4 . 12/2/2006
update please! It's a realy good story! PLEASE don't make me wait long!
Lrnd chapter 4 . 11/20/2006
no hermione is bad ... im sad! ... its a trick rihgt?
Velius Evanesco chapter 4 . 10/28/2006
Nice... Very nice. You write fantastic stories!

I will now and go read more from you collection.

oxjenayxo chapter 3 . 3/24/2006
Very well written. Although you should a bit more angst for Hermione. She still seems like a good girl.
oxjenayxo chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
You're a very talented writer except you have a couple of grammar errors I find consistent, meaning you either don't know they need to be fixed or decided not to fix them. The one that is understandable is the quotations in dialogue with a hyphen or dash in it. For example: "I can't believe you-": Sometimes the end quotation is backwards so you should double-check that. It's a pain but it's not difficult to fix.

The other is the use of the word 'at'. You use it in place of the world 'on' which is more appropriate. For example, the mask is 'on' her arm, not 'at' her arm. Other times you use 'at' instead of 'in' such as, they walked 'at' Diagon Alley, instead of they walked 'in' Diagon Alley.

Just some minor stuff that has been bugging me since I find it in almost all of your HP fics. I've got a pet peeve for grammar :P
account chapter 4 . 6/29/2005
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