Reviews for The Eternal Crown |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Another wonderful story finished. Congrats. The only critic I find I have is that we have no idea what happened to Jaune's family. Oh we can assume they died in the Grimm purges but that story line never got finished. Oh well I guess we can't get everything. Still loved the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another banger, Couer. Shame we never figured out what happened to the Arcs, but alas. |
![]() ![]() ![]() TWO NIGHTS?! GODAMN, TAIYANG |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope I'm not upsetting anyone. I really enjoyed reading [The Eternal Crown]. I would be delighted to incorporate your narrative into my comic style, as I have been considering doing. I think you'll be happy with it, and you might want to consider sharing it. In addition, I'm a talented digital artist that takes commissions right now. If you like, we can connect on Discord or have a more in-depth conversation about it. If I were given permission, I would be delighted to adapt this lovely tale into a comic book. If you're in, let's connect over Discord or via direct messages. If you would allow me the opportunity to adapt this lovely tale into a comic, I would be overjoyed. Here Is my discord Id:artistygoku_20 |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOT BRUCE o7 to one of the best |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i enjoyed reading this but not sure I'm in love with the ending. Kinda felt a little rushed and while the 100 year ceasefire makes sense I'm not sure I found it... satisfying? 100 years is obviously too far in the future for this story to continue, but at the same time it's not like it's too far to just ignore either. It doesn't seem to me like the threat's been dealt with. Jaune's still in a race to prepare what's left of Remnant for the fight even if he won't personally be involved and they still don't have a way to actually deal with Salem. The epilogue doesn't exactly fill me with confidence they'll even survive the next attack... idk it just kinda feels like nothing's really finished. Maybe that was intended and obviously not every story needs to have a decisive end, but yeah I agree with your final AN that it might've been better to lean into the AU more, rather than reveal the setting was a post-post-apocalypse and tie it to canon. Also, kinda sad Jaune never went back to Ansel or acknowledged it after taking Vale, but now I'm really nitpicking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great caster fight! |
![]() ![]() ![]() every time I think about the fight with Salem, the only thing I can think to finish her off is just to jetison her into space. build some form of rocket and send her off. her body wouldnt be able to reform before it implodes on itself again and again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Speaking to your AN on Chapter 88, I think the direction canon was aiming for was essentially humbling the Brothers-reminding them where they came from, essentially teaching them the lesson they set to Salem. The meaning of life. Does that make sense? Rather than killing one or both of them or just continuing things in perpetuity; in other words showing them that they are in fact not Godly, but beings of great and terrible power nevertheless fallible. |
![]() ![]() This whole story was fantastic! every time i read one of these it becomes the new canon in my mind... until i read the next one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very much enjoyed this story! Thank you for writing it! Ozma has learned much and is in a good spot once again, even after Jaune dies, But work is still to be done. A good spot to finish up, with a hopeful outlook! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pueden decir lo que quieran, pero fue una gran historia Saludos desdd Mexico |
![]() ![]() ![]() Siempre he querido escenas de este tipo, donde la verdad la dice jinn a todos, es gloriosa de ver |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, asi que no es un universo alterno, sino un futuro de la linea que conocemos, esta historia mejora a cada minuto |