Reviews for The Eternal Crown
Alexiitz chapter 55 . 4/4/2024
Wow, asi que no es un universo alterno, sino un futuro de la linea que conocemos, esta historia mejora a cada minuto
ledesmajoaquin418 chapter 90 . 3/31/2024
Esta historia me atrapó de principio a fin, realmente me estas inspirando a intentar escribir mis propias historias
Eres increíble!
The Qrow chapter 63 . 3/30/2024
I'm becoming a bit confused regarding the size of your remnant. A couple of weeks isnt nearly enough to gather an army or even the provisions for it. Had they access to planes and trucks then maybe but in this medieval setting you are talking months at the very least to gatter a host of atleast a thousand men. What I mean to say is that your timescale feels off.
mrbear2899 chapter 68 . 3/24/2024
Chapters 67 and 68 are both titled as 67 in the bold text below the cover art credit.
GhostSnoggAsh chapter 1 . 3/21/2024
Yes i love it this story
wearedeadpool chapter 1 . 3/6/2024
great start bro.
Omnireceptacle chapter 25 . 3/6/2024
Ozpin error again in 25 just so u know
Omnireceptacle chapter 19 . 3/5/2024
Here in chapter 19 you said "Can she not sense Ozpin?" while it should have been Ozma
Guest chapter 90 . 1/27/2024
90 chapters but only less than 3300 reviews. Meanwhile, IYWD is 40 chapter, and it has 4600 reviews.
I don't think complete AU of RWBY, or 'medieval retelling' of RWBY is doing good for you.
Arridu chapter 88 . 1/11/2024
Honestly yeah this is about the most believable ending here, in canon with the advanced tech they had its established they could get Atlas into the upper atmosphere above the range of Grimm, so between that and the Relic of Creation its not completely impossible they could potentially have done a Kars solution and found a way to launch her into space to drift immortal forever since we haven't seen any evidence she has long range teleportation, but in this story with the middle ages tech level? Yeah they do not have a means to remove her for good, so a bargain like this is more or less the best case scenario
Guest chapter 90 . 1/1/2024
A bittersweet ending but with much happier notes

Surprised you didn’t hook Blake up with Sun

At least our heroes enjoy the rewards of their journey
Guest chapter 89 . 1/1/2024
I always knew Ruby would jump him once this war ends

And Blake has become the Glynda in this era
MLG Samantha chapter 40 . 12/21/2023
Oz is going to turn Ren into Illidan, neat.

YOU ARE NOT PREPARED
swid16kawail chapter 1 . 12/21/2023
Could you make a modern AU type fanfic like your story "The Unseen Hunt"?

He said it would be interesting, for example, if a zombie apocalypse story could be made with more style. "28 Days" or Jaune getting involved with "magical" elements

A love story where the main girl "miltia malachite" has a good relationship with jaune like in "Service with a Smile" would also be interesting.

Another would be a story similar to "Hunter x Hunter" where Jaune, being younger, travels the world "little prince" style.
Second Fox chapter 90 . 12/21/2023
Bittersweet ending, but it seems oddly fitting with how the tone of the story is. I kinda did want Jaune to reunite with his old family though, get some reactions from them on how his life went. But I suppose this will be good enough.
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