Reviews for The Eternal Crown |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, asi que no es un universo alterno, sino un futuro de la linea que conocemos, esta historia mejora a cada minuto |
![]() ![]() ![]() Esta historia me atrapó de principio a fin, realmente me estas inspirando a intentar escribir mis propias historias Eres increíble! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm becoming a bit confused regarding the size of your remnant. A couple of weeks isnt nearly enough to gather an army or even the provisions for it. Had they access to planes and trucks then maybe but in this medieval setting you are talking months at the very least to gatter a host of atleast a thousand men. What I mean to say is that your timescale feels off. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapters 67 and 68 are both titled as 67 in the bold text below the cover art credit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes i love it this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() great start bro. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ozpin error again in 25 just so u know |
![]() ![]() ![]() Here in chapter 19 you said "Can she not sense Ozpin?" while it should have been Ozma |
![]() ![]() 90 chapters but only less than 3300 reviews. Meanwhile, IYWD is 40 chapter, and it has 4600 reviews. I don't think complete AU of RWBY, or 'medieval retelling' of RWBY is doing good for you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly yeah this is about the most believable ending here, in canon with the advanced tech they had its established they could get Atlas into the upper atmosphere above the range of Grimm, so between that and the Relic of Creation its not completely impossible they could potentially have done a Kars solution and found a way to launch her into space to drift immortal forever since we haven't seen any evidence she has long range teleportation, but in this story with the middle ages tech level? Yeah they do not have a means to remove her for good, so a bargain like this is more or less the best case scenario |
![]() ![]() A bittersweet ending but with much happier notes Surprised you didn’t hook Blake up with Sun At least our heroes enjoy the rewards of their journey |
![]() ![]() I always knew Ruby would jump him once this war ends And Blake has become the Glynda in this era |
![]() ![]() Oz is going to turn Ren into Illidan, neat. YOU ARE NOT PREPARED |
![]() ![]() ![]() Could you make a modern AU type fanfic like your story "The Unseen Hunt"? He said it would be interesting, for example, if a zombie apocalypse story could be made with more style. "28 Days" or Jaune getting involved with "magical" elements A love story where the main girl "miltia malachite" has a good relationship with jaune like in "Service with a Smile" would also be interesting. Another would be a story similar to "Hunter x Hunter" where Jaune, being younger, travels the world "little prince" style. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bittersweet ending, but it seems oddly fitting with how the tone of the story is. I kinda did want Jaune to reunite with his old family though, get some reactions from them on how his life went. But I suppose this will be good enough. |