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no me gusto el capitulo 4, en este capitulo Naruto esta quedando como un pero encadenado que solo lo van usar por su enorme poder y luego lo dejaran de lado, yo sinceramente hubiera echo que Naruto se fuera después de la pelea.

hubiera hecho que sacaran el tema que mato a una persona de niño o que al menos Naruto recordara eso y pensara que por eso no entro a la UA

Naruto pudo ganar a un héroe de rango 6 y estuvo a la par por unos momentos contra un héroe de rango 2, no importa lo que digan una lucha es lucha, no puedes decirme que eso se quedo solo en la UA al menos las demás escuelas deben saber lo que paso en las pruebas, no puedes decirme que no intentaron reclutarlo para ellos, seria increíble si Naruto se va a los Estados Unidos y puedes agregar algunos héroes de Marvel o dc.

se ve que Bakugou es amigo de Naruto, cuando Naruto regresa de la UA pase por su casa y le cuente lo que paso y por que cree que no le aceptaron en la UA y cuando Bakugou vaya el primer día de clases a la UA saque el tema en su salón, de como un niño defendió a su madre de un violador abusivo y por eso no lo dejó entrar a la UA creando una pequeña confrontación de los alumnos que Naruto ayudo en la prueba contra los profesores y así algunos alumnos dejan la UA o esto incluso lo puede hacer Momo Yaoyorozu la novia de Naruto ya que no ha tenido mucho protagonismo y puede contar lagunas historia de como Naruto espanto algunas yakuzas que intentaron molestar a su familia ganándose el favor de los Yaoyorozu cuando era joven

cuando All Might este peleando contra All For One, Naruto venga desde los Estados Unidos y se enfrente a All Might y All For One, saliendo Naruto victorioso y demostrando a todos lo que UA se perdió

no me gusto el capitulo 4, en este capitulo Naruto esta quedando como un pero encadenado que solo lo van usar por su enorme poder y luego lo dejaran de lado, yo sinceramente hubiera echo que Naruto se fuera después de la pelea.
hubiera hecho que sacaran el tema que mato a una persona de niño o que al menos Naruto recordara eso y piense que por eso no entro a la U.A.
Naruto pudo ganar a un héroe de rango 6 y estuvo a la par por unos momentos contra un héroe de rango 2 y importan que digan lucha es lucha, no puedes decirme que eso se quedo solo en la U.A. almenos las demás escuelas debieron saberlo incluso la de . no puedes decirme que no intentaron reclutarlo para ellos. seria increíble si Naruto se va a . y puedes meter algunos héroes de Marvel o dc.
se ve que Bakugou es amigo de Naruto, cuando Naruto regresa de la U.A. pase por su casa y le cuente lo que paso y por que cree que no le aceptaron en la U.A. y cuando Bakugou vaya el primer día de clases a la U.A. saque el tema en su salón, de como un niño defendió a su madre e un violador abusivo y por eso no lo dejaron entrar a la U.A. creando una pequeña confrontación de los alumnos que Naruto ayudo en la prueba contra los profesores y así algunos alumnos dejan la U.A. o esto incluso lo puede hacer Momo Yaoyorozu la novia de Naruto ya que no a tenido mucho protagonismo y puede contar lagunas historia de como naruto espando algunas yakuzas

Eraserhead better had a good excuse of not letting Naruto in UA
.And hope he doesn't pull the oh he doesn't have potential cuz I will call that BS he barely seen on what naruto can do and honestly. I agree with guest Naruto should have been mad and pull an Eric Cartman saying screw them I'm going over to a hero school in America and another thing I have to agree with I have agree guest. Why did everybody have to agree with a Eraserhead he's not the principal of UA nezu is. Eraserhead is not in charge of the school Nezu is.

Nah... eraser being a goddamn hypocrites lol...

They should be fucking begging for Naruto to come back.

He should've been mad or atleast annoyed that when everyone agreed he should enter and somehow the weakest among them (let's be honest here eraserhead is the weakest in the group) says no they all agree?

Nah... because if you're letting people like Bakugou and Mineta in then that's a huge kick in the nuts.

Also the reason why eraserhwad didn't trust or want him at the school was never proved, all they saw was Naruto holding back and then destroying the room, what does that have anything to do with "it's not just about how powerful your quirk is" speal?

I thought it was gonna be an actual test like "save someone" or choose between himself or someone else from entering, some kind of actual challenge that would determine his character, all you did was have him fight the strongest third (2nd year now) in school.

There was no point in this fight or chapter, I thought you'd actually have an actual test, not waste his fucking time.

good fanfic this is not a bad one no matter how you put it some may hate it some may be brain dead and want to spread negativity for no reason other that to see people suffer but me personally I'm a lazy person who trys to find works of art on this website and this is one

hey man I'm not one to do negative reviews but its like you gave up half way through the first chapter creatively speaking. L

useless fic useless naruto no brain a pupett delete this its useless

good work

This was epic. I’m glad that I started this fic. I can’t wait for more.

kinda wish he just left to america that'd be an interesting twist. good chap over all

Awesome chapter

I love that homelander finally got some attention.

Awesome work! Keep it up!

Now, I'm trying to come up with a line of succession based on what you've said so far in the story;

First of all Naruto has got to be part alien, otherwise everyone would be comparing him to this hero or that tyrant from history. So, here it goes:

Naruto's power, in varying degrees of strength first appeared in Kryptonians in ancient history, but his bloodline was always especially strong.

First was Zod, who led Krypton's armies in conquest.

After Krypton died, Zod's descendant, H'el, was tasked with finding a planet suitable to be the new capital of Kryptonian territory. He finds Viltrum, but also finds out that some of the survivors he is leading are clones made to repopulate, and the question of whether he himself is a clone drives him mad, and his wife takes their kid and leaves him.

H'el's descendant, Ikaris, instigated and led the massacre of the weak because he thought it was in his people's best interest.

Ikaris' descendant, Thragg, would lead the armies of the new Viltrumite Empire in conquest.

Thragg's descendant is sent to infiltrate Korugar (Sinestro's planet), and has a half-Korugarian son - Gladiator. Gladiator, who grows up on Korugar, gathers a team of heroes and fights against Viltrumite occupation. He is powerful enough to cripple the Empire's forces in Korugar's sector, but a bounty is put on his head, so he sends his wife and child to a yet undiscovered planet, inhabited by another species that looks just like humans.

Some centuries later, the Korugarian blood in Gladiator's descendant is completely diluted by the blood of the new species, but his Kryptonian/Viltrumite blood awakens - this is Homelander, an especially powerful Viltrumite, but whose lack of training and utter laziness ensured his complete destruction when the Viltrumite forces reached his planet. Homelander's son is inducted into the armies once his own powers awaken and takes a Viltrumite wife.

Some centuries later, Homelander's descendant, Alexandria, born with complete invincibility and a prodigious tactical mind leads a rebellion against Viltrumite leaderhsip and fractures the Empire beyond repair. She becomes a superhero on her home planet afterwards.

Alexandria's descendant, Superwoman, becomes an intergalactic criminal mastermind and eventually is forced to flee to a new galaxy where her descendants eventually find and settle down on Earth, although none of them inherit her powers until Naruto.

Now, considering that Alexandria and Superwoman share skin tone, hair color, and eye color I could even call them mother and daughter while Naruto might very well be Superwoman's grandson considering that the only known quantity separating them is Naruto's mother who is stated to be normal. This very close relation might also be the reason why Superwoman is capable of manifesting herself in the real world. It would also mean that the relationship between Naruto, Superwoman and Alexandria is threeway incest, but it was that already regardless of how many generations separate them. Makes one wonder if Kushina is going to join in.

On a different note, why do you insist of putting an 'I' at the end of 'UA'? Also Ikarus' name is Ikaris unless you are referring to the DC character Armen Ikarus which really wouldn't fit in.

okay so you nerfed your character, completely wrecked your in universe powerscaling, put an unnecessary task that made no sense and made made homelander stronger than planet busters, I'm going to see where this goes but this was your weakest chapter so far