Well, I can't say I hate the way it's done. At least the prose is still good so it is bearable.

Gonna be honest, not a fan of the last part of this chapter. The rest of the chapter was good, but this one is a bit odd. It almost feels like you're stuck and unable to figure out how the plot should go, so you did this weird thing where some omnipotent is going to interfere now.

this hit was stupid as fu. ck what sbit ith all therse gamer fics al ways leaveng without finishing he dxd world

koneko ravel kunou yasaka kuroka ophis are way better then this overrated trash wafus

noooooo asia is the best type to train into a sex oet

where the fu. ck are the petitewomen and lolis im getting fu. cking tired of all these trash bimbos

mc giving away his secrets like fu. cking idiot

why save the bimbo bitch whos to lazy to do shit herself

mc beeing a coward and bending over to devils claiming human lands as theirs where he fu. cking human pride at

im pissed ou killed off the lolita millet yet allowed rayare and her bimbo girlfriend live

disappointing you killed the best fallen angel millet is supreme

akeno amd rias are bad waifus

millet is best fallen angel

petite girls are better s well as lolis are supreme

koneko kuroka ophis ravel kunou yasaka are all best girls and ust join the harem