i havent even finished the first chapter yet and i can already say Gaia is my favorite character.

I hope this sequel actually comes

The only thing in system novels that I find awful is always dungeons, like why do this it takes away the immersion and what the world can offer. If you're going to power creep the MC, at least use the things in the world he is in.

I finally got through the story and all I have to say is this: You didn't have a working plot for this fanfic when you first started did you?

I mean, it started out decent, some ideas where interesting, and the MC OC isn't some spineless idiot that cries and freak out over changes in the canon (seriously all the fanfics have the MC freak out when a change happens in canon when they try to not to change anything and yet the writer forgets that they have the MC OC involve in every canon event thus causing change. Honestly, WTF is wrong with everyone forgetting that detail.) as well not revealing all his secrets like other fanfics love to do. I liked how Aika was one of the romances since she (along with certain other characters) don't get often picked as a love interest.

However, everything that happens felt utterly forced in some case and chapter 26 fully showed it. Having the MC OC be forced into canon events felt like a lazy way to make the MC get involved in every canon events that happened even they get utterly beaten badly in one chapter only to be 100% fine in the next just so they get involved again. So yeah, next time, think of a plot for a story since copying and pasting canon events is by far the laziest thing all writers on this site do all the time.

Thanks a lot for this shit. Wish you same shit in your life… seriously return this 10h back to me. Asshole

Outta curiosity is this series still going?

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yeah, ill be honest. not exactly happy with this new development. making me think of Shiro, who you said was your inspiration. whose rebooted the same damn story like four times.

noticed a typo. you initially referred to Azazel as Ajuka.

if I was more interested in dxd's story, the gender thing would be a deal breaker. as it is, meh.

if anything, I'd say Gabriel is too weak, as the third strongest angel after Michael and Lucifer

I'd say that Ichi is more of a Majordomo or Chief of Staff than a 2IC. And Ni js basically a spymaster.

as for Sacred Gears, in terms of Longinus, my favorite is probably Annihlation Maker. then Alphecca Tyrant.

I think the issue with gender bending is that when the MC gets intimate with them, it’s still “Sirzechs” it’s happening to in their mind and most people aren’t comfortable with it.

aika is hot