That was a fucking pathetic fight. He has them beat by nearly 10 levels plus touki enhancement, so that fight should have ended instantly. How in the fuck did his Holy Sword break to a conjured LIGHT spear?! That makes absolutely no sense at all. Not even mentioning how the sword should be resistant to light and holy damage, but it should ALSO be more powerful than ANYTHING Dohnaseek could conjure out of light. The fact that it shattered is absolutely pathetic.

Also, I really hope the MC doesn't turn out to be a total pussy and not kill anyone. He's supposed to have [Gamer's Mind] to take care of psychological issues, so bitching out at the last moment would be even more pathetic than his fighting skills. If he can't man up, he should just kill himself, considering the type of world he is in now. If he IS too much of a pussy, he could just order one of his summons to do it.

Honestly, the ONLY good thing that came out of this chapter was that Issei died permanently. Everything else was either filler or HORRIBLE fight scene.

I think you've made Rias, Sona, and Akeno too strong in the power scaling. They are all...weak, like barely stronger than Raynare in Canon. If Raynare is level 20, then they should be at BEST level 30. Making them so much stronger doesn't really make any sense, considering the massive difference that the weak ass Issei made in Canon.

Your description of Sword Birth vs Blade Blacksmith makes no sense. According to the wiki, they have the same exact power, just that one is holy while the other is demonic. The only reason Kiba uses the demonic blades more is because he is a natrual Demonic Sword User and has higher affinity for them. Blade Blacksmith should be able to create Holy Swords of customized attributes just like Kiba does with Sword Birth.

Yeesh, he definitely needs to deal with his stamina. One shot? That's pathetic, even for a virgin. Sheer excitement and enthusiasm should have made him last longer than that. Aika, on the other hand, seems EXTREMELY impressive. Taking 8 inches in one thrust as a virgin? She must have been doing some serious practice. :o

Anyways, I'm really hoping Issei gets his head chopped off or something so he can't be reincarnated. I really just don't like him, even if Sora doesn't end up joining a peerage. It'd be better if he just died.

As for Akeno...I don't think Sora is ready for that. He has not only JUST lost his virginity, but he is pretty pathetic all around. I don't know how old he was before he died, but he was definitely old enough to be called a pathetic virgin.

Are you seriously just going to leave Issei to get all the girls, just like Canon? That's just stupid. Plus, this is a fucking GAMER you're talking about. They are SUPPOSED to be OP, so stop making him so freaking weak. As of now, he is absolutely pathetic. Even Issei's dumbass is better than this. Power scaling in DxD is SUPPOSED to happen fast, so I hope you stop holding him back so much.

Alright dude, I really hope the confrontations with Aika either cool down or get some damn privacy. Do you realize how weird it would be for someone to do that in the middle of a school cafeteria surrounded by other students? Quite frankly, just thinking about watching these lunch scenes makes me cringe.

Still no signs of getting rid of Issei. If Rias is going to be a love interest, why would he allow Issei to live? Unless he's into being cucked and NTR (?)... He should just get rid of Issei before it becomes a problem. Who wants a pervert constantly making moves on your girl? Or any girl, for that matter.

Also, the MC seems kind of...dumb. No, like really dumb. We also have yet ANOTHER idiotic perverted virgin protagonist... I'm not impressed.

On another note, 'Blade Blacksmith has the ability to create numerous Holy Swords of different attributes according to the will of the wielders'. This means, he can give any of his Holy Swords different attributes and appearance based on his will/imagination. As such, why is he using a regular iron sword? Just seems kind of dumb.

I really, REALLY hope you're planning on getting rid of Issei before the start of Canon.

noway u cant leave without telling us where he is going next u meanie ~

omg i can see a plot where somebody kidnaps the child and turn him/her against sora

Thank you for a great story. I looked for book 2 but was sad not to find it, I hope you return to Soras adventure one day. That goodbye was a real tear jerker, , I realy hope you send him back one day.

You almost had me thinking you were going to use the cheat item. Rizer can't marry her and take the head of the clan if he's turned into a she.

E qual vai ser a continuação?

Bastava suprimir seu poder e ele não teria que lidar com as vadias

Ei amei a variedade,sinceramente já tava enjoado de necromancia embora eu fiquei curioso dobre arcanismo e se for que nem o diablo então ele tem que consguir essa classe