| Reviews for Forever in a Day |
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   Acacia Vix chapter 23 . 3/18 should mark this story as complete |
| TyDM chapter 10 . 3/14 Hopefully, the experience of Harry experiencing months of Ron being a total ass will help him get over his "first friend" hang-ups, such that he can leave the jealous red weasel behind. |
| TyDM chapter 9 . 3/14 Hermoine is the only girl who said, "I love you." Also, the first time after figuring out the benefits of the loop that he was actually upset about the reset. ... seems pretty clear that I'm Harmony, at least, or multi for Harry (screw Ron). |
| jps986 chapter 18 . 2/16 Bit of a continuity error here. First, Dumbledore can't remember to read his journal till prompted, he should not know initially why Harry is there. Similarly the girls can't remember to go to Dumbledore's office at 9. Technically that is a continuity error from the last chapter as Dumbledore should not have asked them too in the first place. Easiest fix would be having Fawk take them a note to go to his office. Dumbledore just needs to read his journal at the beginning. |
| I hate marshmallows chapter 23 . 1/18 amazing 10/10 |
| Espeon Master Espo chapter 23 . 1/11 You really should do one last chapter for this. Just to wrap it up. Even if you don't, it is still a great story. I am glad to have read it. |
| JustinOtherFictionFan chapter 17 . 1/10 Shower interesting chapter even though it isn't a lemon. It was fun to suddenly realize Harry still didn't know about horcruxes or even the prophecy. |
| JustinOtherFictionFan chapter 16 . 1/10 Can I possibly be the only one who wanted Harry to bugger Rita rotten? That's what I was hoping for when he warned Myrtle to get out of Rita. |
| JustinOtherFictionFan chapter 15 . 1/10 Waaaa! What happened to his plotting to take Fleur to the ball? I mean I guess I can't really complain with how hot this chapter was that I nearly forgot what I was expecting to read on this chapter, but still... |
| JustinOtherFictionFan chapter 14 . 1/10 An incredibly arousing end to a date with Suzette but involving Fleur. Can't wait to see how he persuades Fleur to go with him in just a day. |
| JustinOtherFictionFan chapter 13 . 1/10 You have an amazing imagination. Many writers get stuck in a rut when writing an ongoing lemon like this. 13 chapters in and you haven't hit it yet. |
| JustinOtherFictionFan chapter 12 . 1/10 Easily the HOTTEST lemon I've ever read with the Carrow twins and I think the only one including Hermione and anyone else. |
| JustinOtherFictionFan chapter 10 . 1/9 Absolutely SMOKING HOT! Harry x Hermione x Suzette I do not believe I have ever seen anyone convincingly add an OC in such a lemon. Getting them all 3 together like this was excellent! |
| JustinOtherFictionFan chapter 9 . 1/8 Wow, this one was sexy yet hot me with the feels also at the end there. |
| JustinOtherFictionFan chapter 8 . 1/8 The Ravishing of the Sabine Daphne. Delicious. |