Please where can I read more I'm huckt

Please update this soon

I like Veronica so much better than Ronald, and I adore this whole saga. I do hope you'll be inspired to continue one day, but in the meantime I'll just be happy for what you've given us already.

Looking forward to seeing more

Are you going to write more on this? I just binge read the first story and it was awesome but I can't read this one if it's not finished

Very very good and I hope you will continue it soon following along with the story and eagerly awaiting an update

This is awesome, so I do hope you're doing ok. I really, really want to read more, here hoping your muse finds you and life finds balance again

Have a cat, she'll steal the little nuisances away!

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I just fell across the first book of this series and DEVOURED it. Its so creative and give so much depth with the excepts, I cannot wait to see what you do moving forward.
I know it took three years for 15 chapters on the last book so I remain hopefully optimistic that this tale is still on course for completion.
Thanks for sharing!

Please update faster then last time, because this saga is really good and I and the rest of the readers need to know what's gonna happen next.

is this still being worked on?

Really likeing these Dhaman Harry stories, love the idea so far. Kinda hoping he will be able to turn into a kitsune like Vera as a animal form, then so they can get into mischief. Either great job so far.

Holy shit i need more…

This is starting off wonderfully! I'm curious why Ron is a girl? I have no problem with it, I'm just curious. Will there be fights between her and Hermione later? Over Harry, or lots of things... This is just so exciting!

I had so hoped, that HP would be 'reunited' with Hermione, but I guess that's happening in the next chapter. I'm really happy to have re-discovered the prequel to this story and of course this story as well. Because, last time I read it, the previous story wasn't anywhere near done yet.

You're doing a LOT of world building and I really like that in your story. In any case, I look forward to how this story will progress and hope for an update soon. It's been nearly two months and two weeks (approximately) as of the time I'm writing this.

I hope everything is okay and that you're just unsure as to where to go. Still, you have a lot of hints to a greater plot already setup, so I'm really looking forward to how you'll finish this.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story.

Kingdark.

Another fun chapter!

Can I speculate about why you genderbent Ron?

1) To reinforce that this is an AU?

2) To justify OOC Ron behavior?

3) To alter the dynamics of the Golden Trio?

Personal preference: Make Veronica an inventor (steampunk, clockwork, whatever) analogous to but not identical to the twins. A personal peeve of mine was that Rowling reduced canon!Harry and Ron to lazy jocks who only did well in subjects they were gifted in. They weren't innovative creators and inventors (ex. Map) nor ground-breaking academics. One of Harry's earliest 'amazing' feats, the Patronus, was duplicated by most of the DA and Umbridge(!). This Harry is already excelling in certain areas, I'd love to see Veronica excel in different areas (aside from eating and chess).

Merlin's beard! Idea: genderbend Snape, please! I despise the idea of a bitter vengeful man being obsessed with a woman to the point he requests his master to kill her husband and child but gift the widow to him as a trophy. That's a war crime not a romantic story plot. Rickman redeemed the character somewhat but Rowling originally intended Snape to be a complicated grey character doing the right thing for the wrong reasons. I have grimly wondered what would have happened if a redheaded Harriette had been subjected to Snape's authority.

I'd love to see a female Snape who genuinely loved Lily like a sister, made some horrible mistakes, and is trying to atone without the baggage of unrequited lust. Should still be bitter, angry and snarky.

Google 'Emperor Septimius Severus' to find names of women from the Severus family which might be appropriate to use. I like Caracalla (a name but also refers to a type of cloak) which you could change to Saracalla. Middle name could be Seassa (a sharp knife). Thus Cloak and Dagger Snape, which is about as subtle as Remus Lupin being a werewolf and demonstrates the alliteration which dominates the wizarding world.

Feel free to discard above. Not a good review but your story does get me thinking about possibilities