Reviews for The Family that Chooses You
Shadowlord1295 chapter 145 . 11/29
this story was beautiful. thank you for an amazing story i truly loved it. 10 out 10 will read again. i could help but smile and cry at points of this story. if your reading this comment thank you.
bigdaddyal46 chapter 144 . 11/25
I loved this st
RandomObsessiveReader chapter 145 . 11/24
lovely story, thanks for sharing :)
all the best to you and yours!
Trahald of Uru chapter 57 . 11/21
My earliest memory is of a swimming pool for an apartment complex my family moved out of when I was six months old. My thoughts amounted to "I like this place, but wish I could know when I'd be here," though not in actual words, of course.

A fifteen-month-old retaining a significant memory is not impossible.
Trahald of Uru chapter 55 . 11/21
"Did she just go crazy and fall asleep?"

Thanks for the Firefly quote!

Also, saw too many traces of Manipuladore (don't tell anyone about Voldemort, or his connection with Tom Riddle). Maybe he'll become decent now?
Hamiltonds1991 chapter 116 . 11/20
just a little nit picky but not hugely so because magic lions be magic but lions cant purr
Bee4reelz2001 chapter 60 . 11/2
Rip Olivers gift to harry, never gonna know
Beth1112 chapter 145 . 10/14
I really enjoyed your story.
kjensen27101 chapter 104 . 10/9
I keep forgetting British call cookies biscuits. Story makes so much more sense now.
bao-earthdragon chapter 115 . 9/25
Nevermind my last comment... I am not sorry to have written it, but I am very glad that you seem to have kept it a very short lived drama this time
bao-earthdragon chapter 114 . 9/25
... Is there any reason to inject needless teenage drama where none needs to be? Your story was and is beautiful. But somethng needless that just feels... staged is only needed in a badly written series or film. Your story is neither. It is a good one. So please stop to inject needless drama. Or at least... try to not be such a huge teenage emo about it. ;)

I mean... this latest plot of Katy folding under peerpressure... really? That jut feels like a badly written script. You have broken your Harry in about every possible way. Let him have his happiness abd let somebody else suffer for a while. He needs time to grow up to be a happy adjusted adult. Give him that time.
Right now you once again seem to be insisting on fucking up his happiness... but this time it's just petty. Or at least it feels that way right now.
JasonOHason chapter 101 . 9/12
This chapter is so sad and haunting. It's very well written, and I cried through Harry's breakdown. I want to curse you for making it so sad while praising you for doing such a good job
JasonOHason chapter 66 . 9/10
love this story, this is my second read through. i really line this chapter
Jhermes234 chapter 1 . 8/31
The absolute best Harry Potter fanfic i’ve come across in the years i’ve been on this site. I absolutely love Harry and Katy’s relationship and this was very well written. So many scenes warmed my heart!
Guest chapter 116 . 8/3
I think the problem with the criticism of 115 was the cyclonical nature of so many pairings stories on ff. You know, in love - mad at l- in love - out of love - can't stand the other - back in love ect. ad nauseum. Any one of which spells a positive doom to any relationship in the real world experience, at least in my nearly 80 years of real world experience of relationships.
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