I don't like asia

Honestly differences are more interesting than similarities. At least to me. Makes for a more interesting time writing, forget the reading. The more limitations and corners you drive yourself into,the more fun it is to find your way out of them. Haha, I love writing so much :) And I had fun reading your fic. Ty

How do you picture your ending?
I find that tracing back from the ending is pretty helpful and fun

Me gusta bastante este enfoque y la historia, y que tenga un shinju, y el Byakugan y Rinnegan

Saludos

If he has space time ninjutsu why doesn’t he try to find a way back to the elemental nations?

when you said Naruto has straight hair i just noped-out every time i picture Naruto with straight hair he just looks fucking stupid

I say B.
Great Storry.

hope to read more.

Why not ajuka for a change

Anyone is better match than the Boob Dragon.

I don't know what you mean by route but I choose A. Hope you post some more

A, please continue.

Wow, that went from good, to out right horrendous, what the hell?! You could have made the expose of the Shinju by having a made up character, gain a small power up like how Ophis give out her snakes. But that beside the point.

You adding the Shinju to the mix, makes it this story, like that of oil and water, the first 3 chapters makes it blend all well, but at chapter 4, it's like, skipping to much, and by this chapter, it more of a mess by adding in an unnecessary factor like the Shinjuu.

Whelp, I'm really lost for words now, I'll just wait for the next chapter to see how it will turn out.

My tip to you is, remove the Shinjuu from the mix, Naruto was the only one you said that was transported to DxD world, don't need to add more and just make Naruto blend in the DxD storyline, like he was a character of the series, an unknown variable.

That's... a short chapter lol

This is really good and different to the usual Naruto dxd crossovers.