Reviews for Naruto's Karma
Guest chapter 4 . 10/15/2023
Honestly differences are more interesting than similarities. At least to me. Makes for a more interesting time writing, forget the reading. The more limitations and corners you drive yourself into,the more fun it is to find your way out of them. Haha, I love writing so much :) And I had fun reading your fic. Ty
Guest chapter 4 . 10/3/2023
How do you picture your ending?
I find that tracing back from the ending is pretty helpful and fun
Darth-Kage chapter 4 . 9/18/2023
Me gusta bastante este enfoque y la historia, y que tenga un shinju, y el Byakugan y Rinnegan

Saludos
zx20000006 chapter 1 . 5/20/2023
If he has space time ninjutsu why doesn’t he try to find a way back to the elemental nations?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2023
when you said Naruto has straight hair i just noped-out every time i picture Naruto with straight hair he just looks fucking stupid
gong01 chapter 4 . 5/13/2023
I say B.
Great Storry.
Sageofchaos chapter 4 . 5/12/2023
hope to read more.
calderoneric758 chapter 4 . 5/12/2023
Why not ajuka for a change
Naru321 chapter 4 . 5/12/2023
Anyone is better match than the Boob Dragon.
iiNeo chapter 4 . 5/12/2023
I don't know what you mean by route but I choose A. Hope you post some more
Habu2010 chapter 4 . 5/12/2023
A, please continue.
One Happy Birb chapter 5 . 5/11/2023
Wow, that went from good, to out right horrendous, what the hell?! You could have made the expose of the Shinju by having a made up character, gain a small power up like how Ophis give out her snakes. But that beside the point.

You adding the Shinju to the mix, makes it this story, like that of oil and water, the first 3 chapters makes it blend all well, but at chapter 4, it's like, skipping to much, and by this chapter, it more of a mess by adding in an unnecessary factor like the Shinjuu.

Whelp, I'm really lost for words now, I'll just wait for the next chapter to see how it will turn out.

My tip to you is, remove the Shinjuu from the mix, Naruto was the only one you said that was transported to DxD world, don't need to add more and just make Naruto blend in the DxD storyline, like he was a character of the series, an unknown variable.
Tr1vium chapter 5 . 4/27/2023
That's... a short chapter lol
Guest chapter 5 . 4/24/2023
This is really good and different to the usual Naruto dxd crossovers.
flo463 chapter 5 . 4/24/2023
no Issei x Asia best couple, fuck haters!
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