great, I hope you continue to write to read this work

Sigue.

Continue

Continua

I really loved the story I would really appreciate it if you continue the story! :D

you obviously need to improve writing quality but other then that this fanfic has potential

Great job

It is interesting to say the least, I really liked the combat of Naruto and I want to see the reaction of laughs to wake up and know that there is someone who overcomes it completely, the only thing I can complain is that the chapters are somewhat short in 2 minutes you read them, about the grammar and writing I can not comment since English is not my mother tongue and I also have them outside alone I hope they are a little longer and the wait is not so long.

:)

Well Your The First That Wrote A Story Like This Can't Wait How You Progress With It

I like it

Hahahaha

the story is amazing

I suggest a BETA.

You have waves, but that should be weaves. There were more grammatical errors but can't be bothered going through them all.

So Karma's give a dark impulse interesting. Don't know anything about Boruto, nothing more than a major plot hole.

Neat chapter though.

Ha, Naruto was holding a lot back.