Reviews for Erised's Bane
Geovanni Luciano chapter 23 . 5/22/2008
I can certainly understand why you've given up on this story, Ron and Hermione as a love story is ghastly. I wish you luck with your non-writing.
Geovanni Luciano chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
Well, to be blunt, it's a f'ed situation to start.

Geovanni Luciano
Sweet Sakura Curls chapter 37 . 8/23/2006
I know you said that this story is discontinued...but is there any chance you'll start it up again? It's absolutly amazing!
c chapter 36 . 7/22/2006
This Willow character is horrible and completely unbelievable. There is no way that a distant Muggle relation would a) be informed of magic when there has to be at least one squib somewhere in the area and b) be allowed to go to Hogwarts, far less attend classes. Unless she is absolutely vital to the plot (and even then I might consider finding an alternate method), I suggest you cut her out.
blackspawndragon chapter 37 . 7/16/2006

It's great so far! Ilove it, and i lovefew books/stories.

Dont stop now, keep it up
I-LOVE-COWS.COM chapter 13 . 3/26/2006
YEA! way to go dude(or dudet!) YEAY! Genny and Nevel sitting in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G.
I-LOVE-COWS.COM chapter 12 . 3/26/2006
hey, i don't think that people liked the fact that Dumbledor died. i don't think ive seen one fanfic for the 6th book! ha, thats funny
I-LOVE-COWS.COM chapter 2 . 3/26/2006
Good story! keep it up!
alfred7188 chapter 37 . 1/17/2006
No no no no no no no no NO! this story was too good to discontinue. its not fair! i finally find a decent harry-other fic and its discontinued!
Shadowfox chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
i mispelled 'loved'
Shadowfox chapter 30 . 11/2/2005
ok,i read al the chapters,im just way to lazy to write reviews for all of them.i laved it!
The Soapy Kid chapter 23 . 10/19/2005
OHNO! Harry's in deep shit now. Hahahahahahahahahaha.
Bouncerok chapter 37 . 6/21/2005
I really do love this story ans I hope you would finish it
Cat Feral chapter 2 . 6/20/2005
I've only read the first couple of chapters but I'm enjoying it so far. I have to say, one thing jumped out at me:

Dumbledore smiled. "No, it wasn’t, but McGonagall tells me that you have Auror ambitions, and..."

I can't see Dumbledore refering to "McGongall" without her title, "Professor" when speaking to a student.

Otherwisde - good story! I hope we havn't seen the last of Megan.
dead feather chapter 37 . 6/19/2005
Discontinued... bu - but... damn!

I just wanted to see Harry tell to his godmother all those things he has been thinking along the way. Like in the cemetary that she might not die for him but would and did kill for him. He could also tell her that he thought his mother asked her because he could teach her something about love... or better yet, he could show her.

Megan was a good surprised. I still wonder though how she had Harry's wand and not Voldemort? Why did LV ever let the wand out of his clutches? Did they try destroy it?

And will Harry find out more about his parents study in the dept. of mysteries and about that stone? How did the DE's know he was there that night? Did Harry leave the door open so that now the other unspeakables are investigating the room and stuff in there?
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