lmao at Mr. Popo being the unerving Magmortar that everyone was mentioning.. great chapter

DAWN WHY LET EVERYONE FLEE

Im getting annoyed at the insane plot armor this team Scorn has, aside from that, great chapter.

so i wondered why team scorn seems so fake and yeah its a fictional pokemon villain team that even seems unpopular online lmao. all these rp teams sound cringe... huh.

Ok so far its just plot armor nobody loses or even struggled. seriously come on make battles interesting, give them a REAL reason to train or something.

I've spent weeks binge-reading this story and have a LOT to say about it.
At first, I was hesitant to read this given the star's a forced transgender (I have no problem with LGBT unless it's forced), but after skimming the first few chapters, then pacing myself when I-Kenny came in, I found myself enjoying the story, especially since it's not a complete copy-and-paste of the anime. The character development with many characters, like Ash, Paul, Lana, and such was quite nice. I also enjoyed how this story breached certain issues and provided more background information for a lotta anime characters. Another thing I love about the story is the Amourshipping; it's one of my Top 5 favorite pairings of the anime.
About Team Scorn, my opinion of them is mixed. I loved how the characters that make up most of the organization are counterparts and references to other anime like Naruto, One Piece, My Hero Academia, etc. I don't find them completely evil (except for certain members like Zed; rot in hell, you *******), but more in the gray area. I can see why the name is Scorn; they've felt scorned by the world, so they've struck back. In essence, Scorn didn't come out of nowhere, the world created them.
One thing that I dislike about the story is how short and undetailed the battles are. Gym Leaders likely would've had counters for Types they're weak against, so the battles against them would've lasted longer. Also, they have teams for higher-badge trainers and yet, the ones they use against the Isekai trio are the same as the games.
Overall, I'd rate this story a 7.8 out of 10.

I've already left another review on this chapter, but are you really gonna bring back up Pikachu not frying Dawn's bike every time it gets mentioned?

You seem to rely incredibly heavily on "tell, don't show" storytelling. You shouldn't have to specify that Dawn got the hot chocolate from the same shop Roark got his coffee. That's something the reader should grasp from context clues. Otherwise you're just over-explaining

Oh boy, a Ugandan Knuckles reference

I really like the story so far, but I'm noticing that you tend to use very redundant language in your sentences. Saying in one sentence that Cheryl's request was fulfilled, followed by another sentence saying she fulfilled her quest, is just unnecessarily wordy

So I waited until the very end to review this story. and I have to say it’s one of the best I have ever read. I’m at the point of wishing for a sequel that involves the Orange Islands and completing the Pokédex. I’m also kind of confused by the status of Team Scorn; is it fair to say that they are in hiding? Since they destroyed Paldea, can they be said to have won? Or did they lose in the end?

I will say that there were a few issues I had with the story; one is that I thought Akeno was a one-dimensional villain without any real motivation for her villainy. Would have liked to see better development there instead of a hate sink. Iris, similarly, really seemed like a jerk.

A fitting end to this story, also I guess I misread what I thought was a plot twist with Ideku being the Pariah. Glad he wasn't to be honest...

Wow thanks for writing this to the end

Thanks for everything. I was on this ride since September 2022. It always is a pleasure to see a fanfiction be seen all the way through to the end. I disagreed with choices and characterization in this story, but I didn't write it. You did. You wrote over a million words in your own world of Pokémon.
Take a break my friend, you've earned one for the consistent once-a-week update schedule for this story.

Thanks for everything. Catch Em' All!

Ty for this story

Good luck with your other stories, and praying maybe some day this story get a sequel

Anyway some key points I think you should consider, in case to do a sequel or some side stories to fill remaining matters

- What about Kaito? was he killed or captured?

- What about Nina? was her only objetive be recognized? because I doubt she had needed to join in a criminal group to prove it

- What about Ideku? was all a plan to turn in a hero?

- To do some flashbacks to explain some characters' PoV, maybe you would can explain how it is suposed Iris turned in a champion to begin

- About the pokedex and captured pokemon. I understand to be a key point of the games, capture all region pokemon and complete pokedex, and if someone find some unknown pokemon cath it to study it, but it has non sense in a real world were they are living beings catch them just for collection

- About the mythical and legendary pokemon, if you do a sequel situated in the future, maybe you would can do pokemon world league or whatever organization responsable of decide such things, establish clear rules which regulate the use of legendary and mythical pokemon in official competitions. Even without Iris protesting it has non sense few having the luck of get legendaries and winning all