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This story is fucking garbage

This author is a bonafide mentally malnourished dumbass. That's pretty much all there is to it. The MC lies like a complete idiot, trying to show off to Fury and Clint like a little kid who has just gotten a new toy and must show it off to his friends to be a cool kid.

It's childish and pathetic.

Worse yet? Thor is literally next door and they can just ASK HIM and all the lies made by the MC would crumble. And you can sure bet your stupid ass that they would ask.

It's moronic. Mc being a bonafide idiot liar is just off-putting. He does not need to tell them the truth. He really shouldn't. But this? Pathetic.

Of course, the author is an insecure little shit who needs to make his MC monologue and explain his abilities while pretending to be a Green Lantern. Because why not? Fucking cunt with no spine.

speaking from experience its q pain in the ass oiling and balming a beard right

The Dex-Starr POV was freaking priceless! XD

Meh, I was hoping he would shag the elf chick, but I guess that was too much to ask with Sif there.

There are some spelling mistakes here and there, but nothing too egregious yet, hopeful that's something that improves over time. The writing is decent and digestible, I enjoy the concept but I can already see tiny cracks that hopefully remain only just that.

Overall, not a bad first impression.

You put it on your WHATTT? Btw it's good that he has a villain there. I really felt that it's redundant for a fanfiction to just suddenly add the mc there. Like bro do you have a purpose there? Coz the canon characters can do shit bro no need for your help lol

Really hoping you come back to this and Brightest Doom. If not I’ll just have to come back and reread them again later to get my fix.

So does he only remember the convenient bits then?

was mostly enjoying the over the top-ness of this.. until the guitar solo. Can't say i was very sure about your handling of the red ring either, and the jessica sub-plot was.. oddly flat, but most of this was a good fun romp with some nice, novel stuff to it.. then that.

Good luck going forward, enjoy your story

I take it all back. This one chapter was brilliant lmao

All that hype about having one of the strongest objects in the DC universe and then he realizes he’s in Marvel and he breaks down? You literally have one of the strongest objects on your fucking finger. Again, it doesn’t make sense and it just feels so stupid. That’s the only word I could come up with that can describe all of the emotions reading this feels like. Stupid. That’s it. It’s stupid.