Reviews for Fleur De Lis |
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![]() ![]() What the hell did the poor dragon do. The ego of harry just to kill a innocent dragon just so he can show his power to the world. At last this time he is a mini dark lord harming innocent beasts just because he can. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Boring, clichéd story. The characters are flat and the dialogue is terrible. I thought they don’t write things like that anymore these days. "Patreon" Clearly, clearly. This is already becoming a mark of “quality”. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story. i look forward to your new chapters every week. Especially dreams of home and the newest one. This one was great. i read it in less than a day. i could not set it down. Thanks for all of the great stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() im reading this and damn, its a good story so far and i love it. since we have a second Potter, i really wished Harry would have been Gellerts heir basically taking his name as Harry Grindelwald and maybe naming his future son Gellert. that would be nice and since this is a Harry x Fleur fic, i can see Harry moving to france to live there with Fleur... however i shall see how this fic goes since im only at chapter 9 :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I dont understand the purpose of the whole dual wands situation. while the concept of dual wielding swods does exist, it's usually regarded as being less effective and less efficient because of the need to split your focus. i feel like wands would require more focus and more concentration than swords. Then there's the idea that he wanted to keep his ability to dual wield a secret. If that was the case, why didn't he just say that he wouldn't be using the other wand in the tournament? Then his secret wouldn't have gotten out. If he was planning on using it in the tournament, why is he upset that the secret came out a couple weeks early? This may have been why I stopped reading around this point last time i read this story. I had decided to reread it because i couldn't remember. I'm going to continue this time, but it does bother me a bit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just wanna say how incredible this fic is! Not that I’m surprised after reading Dreams of Home. |
![]() ![]() Can't see it yet.. but has the sequel come out yet? I know you have two other stories you've written. But is one of them a sequel? Or it not out yet. Hope all is well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() the author shares her story for free the least you could do is thank her. if you find it boring go and find another story that will suit your taste! |
![]() ![]() Worst writer ever. Can't take any criticism and is very petty blocks people and then criticism them as they can't respond |
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![]() ![]() What's this shit? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just remembered, but wasn't Percy Weasley supposed to have graduated the year prior and gone to work for Barty Crouch in the Ministry? Has he been held back a year? No wonder he wasn't picked for Head Boy... |