The plot for this is decently interesting but the characters just feel like robots and their dialogue feels so stilted. I could overlook the fact that at least three characters in the story are supposed to have finished Hogwarts the previous year but I find the whole Grindlewald mentor arc a bit hard to accept. There is also the fact that this version of Harry seems to be better than everyone around him and everyone in the supporting cast seems to either revere or fear him, to be honest, it just seems so cliche. I think I'm going to stop reading here.

I can tell that this story is based more on the films than the books.

I hope your Harry learns how to be humble. Seriously every time he's talking to someone he's always talking to them as if they're his lesser.

He always has to bring up his own skill in each subject as someone else is doing something. That's the type of behaviour that in real life makes someone undesirable to talk to.

This was an excellent story, and the first I've read of Grindy being a mentor figure.

I really liked how Justin wasn't an afterthought and was a little badass in his own right.

Thank you for all the hard work.

Yeah, 16 years of hate and neglect so strong that Harry wants to remove the Potter from his name and be a full-fledged back, just gets tossed aside and overwritten with Pettigrew’s death lmao… very beliveable

I really enjoyed the story and look forward to the sequel.

Incredible chapter

Amazing story thanks. Can't wait for the sequel

Good story.

Fantastic...

What a greqt story.

This is a really great and truly different story. Glad I found it. Be proud of your ideas and writing

“Mon and me,” not “Mom and I.”

What a show! I hope Harry and Justin also get some tutelage from Dumbledore as well I think they could see each other being friends after fighting together.

This AU kept me on the edge of my seat throughout. I loved the personalities, the quick leap into action from the beginning to the end. Gellert was written so descriptive that the charisma and power he weld had me captivated. I could see how so many could be seduced and I could witness how power corupts. I noted Harry's serious effort not to lose himself to bitterness and resentment and later battle his anger.
This was an very enjoyable adventure. Kudos to the author. I read ever chapter in on sit today. I couldn't wait to see what happened next every chapter.