uhm Fleur the lis was feeling finished with maybe 1-2 good epilouge chapters to wrap it up , to Keep the story going with timetravel seems cheap also Fleurs Thirst for adventure seems of and NOT so her charakter/race.
That we got zero from all of Harrys Awesome inventions that get always talked about is awefull .

Even when both timetravel to the past and Gellert knew from beginning and all this,it would suck hard .
Also can i ask 1 question that just comes to mind why did Justins Patronus change from Stag to Lion to Raven? becase Harrys was a Raven.

okay Story nothing Spectakular just solid

HOW obvius is that Davis as A KNOWN death EATER is behind the murders?! and after this chapter chase is another death muncher

Looking forward to Fleur La Fois! I loved this story, and the sequel sounds promising based on this chapter!

It was a true pleasure to read thank you so much

i dno how your gonna end it but take a bow it was a lovely journey

its been a thrilling journey thank you.

its was breathtaking omfg

omg 5 voldermorts vs Albus and Gellert and super harry its practically giving me the damm zoomies how can i sleep with this haha its fantastic.

my leg is jackhammering like a drug addled meth head omfg im sooo excited

HECK YES WHAT A SHOW.

now i cant wait but i dont think ill finish this i got distracted haha

oh my goodness its fantastic im gonna finish this tonight stuff sleep im obsessed

holy crap i didnt see that coming

if someone had challenged harry in that duel like made him work for it. after talking smack to dumbles before, it would of ruined the entire momentum of the story