Reviews for The Black Prince Of The Enchanted Forest
AvidReader2425 chapter 6 . 2/14/2023
Thanks for another very fun and entertaining chapter, I really enjoy this story, and I like how this particular version of Harry Potter is characterized. Very much looking forward to any future chapters, as I do with many of your stories as well. Hope you’re having a great day.

Story Idea: this basically comes from the fact that I recently watched a game play play through of the Dead Space Remake. I figured the premise could be something along the lines of Harry Potter, pulling Voldemort, through the veil of death, this Harry Potter, being much more war hardened, and who studied extensively in battle tactics, various forms of magic and dark magic, and war after the events in the first year. Eventually hunting down various death eaters, before his final confrontation with Voldemort.

He arrives on the ishimura at the start of the game, may be a few days before the start of the game, but his arrival, and its magical nature, causes him to absorb quite a bit of the energy of the marker. He becomes something far more than human, or a wizard, harnessing the psychic energy of the marker, as well as the memories of Voldemort. This gives him a pseudo form of immortality, due to the influence of the marker, and as he fights and dominates, Necromorphs, similar to shadow of Mordor, he can put more soldiers under his sway, or absorb their biomass, similar to prototype.

By absorbing the biomass, he increases his overall strength, gain various abilities, depending upon what he absorbs, and increases his defense by increasing his density. Eventually, he will be able to revive and transform some of the dead bodies. He comes across into his own creations as well. Using a combination of his magic, and the energy from the Marker, fighting for overall dominance of the ship, and the influence of the hive mind and the marker. After a few days or a week, that’s when the main start of the game comes in to play, and maybe meeting a gender bent version of Isaac.

Maybe he can use transfiguration to store his various soldiers in an expanded space, helping fight against the various onslaught of Nevomorphs, making his way through the gameplay story with The gender bent, Isaac, or normal Isaac lol. The eventual goal would be defeating the leviathan, the hive mind, and absorbing the rest of the energy from the man-made marker.

This could even be a much longer story, making his way through all of the games, and eventually some kind of sequel, and another galaxy fighting things like the flood, or some other alien presence.

Just a random idea. Once again, thanks for another enjoyable chapter. Appreciate the work you put into it.
A10riddick chapter 6 . 2/13/2023
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

Love that Hermione was playing devil's advocate and still having Harry's back!

That was an interesting twist for Cora! Loved that she showed Dumbles his true persuasion with how black his heart is no matter his justifications!
Hexylen chapter 6 . 2/13/2023
I have said it before and I'll say it again, Maggie Smith/Prof. McGonagall is a treasure and the world does not deserve her.
Devilsummoner666 chapter 6 . 2/13/2023
Glad to see this got updated! Was worried it was abandoned, but now Minerva is investigating his girlfriends, and finding them interesting atleast. And now Snow is being forced to talk to Hadrian... that'll be awkward
Damien Evermere chapter 6 . 2/13/2023
ah its good to see another. of your masterpieces updated long may you keep tour lack of Writers block and mastery of creative art
marlastiano chapter 6 . 2/13/2023
Yami Luna Kitsune chapter 5 . 2/5/2023

i'm assuming that you are building up to the lemons?

cannpt wait for the next chapter
Oddballzebra chapter 3 . 2/2/2023
What’s the point of giving him a harem if there aren’t any lemons?
Oddballzebra chapter 1 . 2/2/2023
Henry is an ungrateful little bastard that needs to get his ass beat.
Mando-Vet chapter 5 . 1/22/2023
This is an amazing story, and I genuinely hope that you return to finish it one day.
Numbervania chapter 5 . 1/6/2023

Albus wonders why his people simply can't do what they're told. Because they're not truly under the Imperious curse?
Luna in the churchyard, sing, "Tiptoe through the tombstones with me."
Aw, I was hoping Luna would turn out to be Alice instead. Though Luna as a fairy/pixy promises she can get away with some mischief of her own. Wonder what'll happen when she meets/befriends OUAT's Tink.
What do you mean multiple relationships aren't common in the British wizarding world? Multiple marriages are allowed when one person like say Hadrian happens to be the last ciin of more than one house, like again Hadrian being last ciin of House Potter due to his wizarding parents' murder and House Black due to Sirius's murder at Bellatrix's hands in the DOM back in Chapter 1 of this fic.

Really interested to see how this fic progresses through what's left of the OUAT S2 storyline onto S3. Yeah, more family members you don't know about showing up having zero chance of happening. *Waves at Zelina and Peter Pan.
Numbervania chapter 3 . 1/6/2023
Area of Magical Mystery... AOMM.

*Gasp! Hermoine, the great and powerful Dumbledor dared to use an "acronym" to shorten an organization's full name into its base initials! How dare he commit such affrontery! Aren't you going to indignantly challenge him by saying that it's not "AOMM" but Area of Magical Mystery? Honestly, the nerve of the professor.

So yeah, insert whatever pinch of sarcasm into that as you want. Truly, I pity the poor dope who tries to teach the supposedly smartest witch of her age what an acronym is or how they're used every day. Then again, it's just another contradiction that's par for the corpse of Hogfarts Deathtrap, she freely calls Defense Against the Dark Arts "DADA" and yet gets huffy whenever her pet project is referred to as SPEW. Go fig.
Mari Wollsch chapter 5 . 12/19/2022
super, can't wait for more xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
NazgulBelserion chapter 1 . 12/19/2022
Ugh Henry fkin hate that kid, he literally ruined show for me lol
Guest chapter 4 . 11/28/2022
Hmm im disappointed Harry didnt put a curse on Dumbledore

Like a curse to never find him

Like having no sense of direction when the destination is Harry and everyone connected to him

Maybe take his magic?
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